Great story and analysis.

I love how you got the characters right! It made it feel like I was watching the show itself. I hope you can continue with this amazing work!

You have such a fluent way of writing. You pull your readers in and have them sit on the side lines as the story unfolds in front of them. Your writing is colorful and filled with strong emotions. I love the fact the Deeks stepped in to form that bond that Callen so desperately needs at this moment in time. This is an awesome story, beautifully written. Bravo.

Well done.

Nice, very nice. Love it!

Heh, truly liked it! I always thought they would get along, with how they both grew up! T

Lovely one shot! Really heart warming!

They should totally be friends. Nothing against Sam and Kensi, but I'd love to see more scenes of these two relating to each other. Nice fic.

This was very well written, I saw a different side to Deeks through your work. I had not seen the parallels between these two so clearly, what a fantastic angle. Thanks for the read. Abi

I loved this little post-script to the episode. Few words really but lots of thoughts. And I am waiting for the TV show to show more connections, support, kindred spirits that Callen and Deeks could be.

Nice little scene between the two. I like how the part about how despite their differences they are who they because of their fathers. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful loved the comparison of the two they are indeed who they are because of what they lived

Great story

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Nice! I really do hope they explore more of this relationship on the show. You showed so well how much they have in common, and it's a mystery to me why they haven't done more with the two of them so far.