I'll be waiting for the next series...o
#thumbs up

SHOUJO MANGAS OKAY WE GOT 'Hirunaka no Ryuusei' umm 'Taiyou no Ie' 'Hibi Chouchou' 'Tonari no Kaibutsu-kun' and way more to come but that's what comes to mind. You should note that those are my ultimate favorites. 'Ao Haru Ride' 'Kimi ni Todoke' and many others are out there that you can read too. :)

I haven't been catching up to this, simply because I'm thinking that this story has been stretched out too long. It often strays from the plot. Now I'm saying this as a friend, not as someone who wants to troll, okay? I think that the story's too long, stretched, and the OCs are charming but there's a limit to how many a reader can recall. I think you need to cut this story short and call it a day already, or end this one somehow and make a sequel. I mean, 94 chapters is a lot, and some aren't even that eventful, you know? I'm... I'm sorry if I'm being to firm and honest with you, but I just can't hold myself back from this. Don't take it personally, I don't mean to offend or hurt you in any way.

I'm really tired to be honest. I think I just need to sleep. I've been having a bad day, so I hope I didn't come off too harsh or forced on you... *looks down*

xxXMythiaXxx
P.S. I've drawn all of the Bullets girls, and they just need coloring. Finally... they were taking me forever haha! *sweatdrops*

Oh yay! The next chapter is up! (I am the same person who commented on the previous chapter.) My lord, did I just fall for Aomine and Tomimura?! And... my oh my, Yua cuteness overload!

This is one of the stories that actually made me start my own knb fanfiction! I can't wait to see the fan art for your OCs. I'm still trying to draw mine!

In response to the author's note, the story does feel a bit draggy. Yet I continue to read since my favorite girl is Sakai at the moment. (Mentally apologize for my favoritism.) A random pair that has been in my head for a while: Kurosei and Hara! Haha, because both of their bangs cover their eyes!

Heyy! I'm reading the second chapter of this story (which is really interesting) BUt seriously? I don't think Akashi would say: "Think about our future!" Or at least in that kind of tone. It was hilarious, how Akashi said that Ryouta believes we are missing something... but seriously...

I feel so much for the OCs. Will you also make me feel for the canons too? xD I want them more involve! that's just my suggestion and wish though, haha! I mean, I feel for Kise too and that is good! For him to be shock when he heard it was Michibe... man. I can't even say it.

And in the corner, I will squeal for the Sakai sisters...!

Holy cr...! omg! Michibe! Dx Poor Kuroko! I would have been the same too if I saw such a scene!

And I have been very curious about Shinku for a while now. Thank you for upadating!

*pfft* Sorry... I just laughed when you wrote 'brainless head' for the adorable Kagami :)

April and Taiki are adorable too... But, ya know, I feel like Kagami. Unable to despise Maki at all... I adore her even more... Iv, what a twisted feeling you have induced?!

Ahh... Kuroko made his Ninja appearance. Poor Kagami!... Isn't Kuroko the sweetest?
I so love all the OCs you created along with the way you portray the canons. I can't help but feel the right essence.

Kurosei keeps following Aomine... is this the habit Gin mentioned?
Ooooo. ... I love it when Maki looses her temper; which is as often as she opens her mouth... hahahhahahahhaha hahahhahahahhaha! !
Shin-chan! Oh boy... The length he would go. Unbelievable. ...
And...
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Uwaaahhhhhhhh ahahahhahhahahahh! This is dam n hilarious! ! Rock went from Ground-Midorima-(Maki)Kurosei-Aomine(Midorima) and back to the Ground. As if it had no displacement at all (.')...

A correction: He was slightly worried for her since she did not look the (type) to fight.

Ahomine's concern got twisted to his perverted nature... *can't laugh any more... stomach hurts...*

Midorima made Fukui sad... Takao you are a genius 0_o ...and I want some more of Takao and Maki moments *pouts like Fukui-chan* pretty please! !

I did opt to ignore Seki with Takao (even after all those scenes) because I happen to have taken a sudden belief in Oha-Asa that Seki and Fukui will be involved with the greenette and... Fortune for Takao and Maki.

Shin-chan is so desperate to get outta that love triangle that Oha-Asa predicted. ... such a fool! Has anything ever failed that Oha-Asa predicted? Ya should know better :P

Takao should go and look up the horoscope and then tease Midorima to death...

Oh ho... Chapter ended.
Well then Iv, cya!

Oh that's so weird! I did not see this chapter in my inbox! Must have deleted it by accident! xD

As always, I have fun reading what's going to happen next! It makes me forget what the story was even about to begin with and i really hope you will keep on writing please! These short chapters are killing me! (I mean it in a friendly way!)

Lazy Ahomine appears XDDDDDDDDD. ... seriously! Whenever he shows up I just can't help but giggle!

I see that Aomine has got his priorities straight... Mai-cha!
Moto was seriously considering being a fan but not as "devoted" as him. She is a GIRL!

I think Aomine did meet Seki during the match nor how would he remembers Ginmori... My memory is failing once again! 0_o

What habit of Kurosei *shakes self* she can see death but what other than that? ? Suspence is killing me...

A small correction: Within a couple of (yards), Aomine kept their distances and shifted his weight on his left leg.

Hmmmmm... was Aomine around when there was a blast in the stadium of Inter-High? That was the first entry of Ginmori. ...
Katsuo! Why is he mentioned here? *continues reading*
Dead zone... dead zone... dead zone... who is 'he' Ginmori referring? 'He' taught the pretty boy... so whi is this he and I think pretty boy is Katsuo. Why did I think of Shinku to be the one who taught dead zone?

Aomine is sweet in a weird way. And his instincts in basketball is unparalleled so if he doesn't like it then it must be something bad...
Oh that's right... Okamura asked why Ginmori had colored her hair and I thought it was just that... How far this has gotten? This is seriously mesmerizing. ...
Especially when Ginmori said about zone and natural talent. The hatred of those who seek something with all their might only to have the 'natural born' breeze in and take it... (*3*)

Oi oi! This can't be good. Is it okay to tell Aomine about the killing. Wouldn't their boss dispose them off. And was Gin mocking while talking about GoM bringing in Miracles or was she seriously hopeful. She is confusing me so much. She is one heck of a character along with Sakai, Seki and Fukui. Actually forget it. I like all of them...

I hope Aomine is kept out of the harm's way.

Imayoshi as Yoshi-kun? Kawaii! other than that, I am scared for Michibe! I was hoping Kuroko can help her somehow too!

Wait! I gotta fangirl scream as Midorima enters! I forgot about my ikmen while squealing for my adorable, yet anticipated, Takaki :P :3 Though the fluffy scene with Seki was heart fluttering. Takao is such a cutie *3*
Oh c'mon Taiga! Be his godson because your denial is just killing me with its cuteness XDDDDDDDDD

A small correction: Kuroko was emotionless while Alexandra was wearing a big smile, possibly in a teasing way().
The 'possible' becomes redundant. ...

Oh noooo... I'm going to die from Kagami's sweetness. My heart is dangerously skipping the beats ; P
*bwahahahahha* Midorin got caught!

Poor Taiki! He is so sullen that he doesn't want Maki as his daughter. ... I hope he never realises the truth wrapped in this death.

Did Maki say that she she would rather MARRY Takao?! THIS MADE MY DAY! Yayyyyyyyyyy. ... and Takao was right there. Right. There.
I just can't stop giggling. I. Just. Can't.
TAKAKI TAKAKI! *Me and Momoi together scream "Now marry!"*
*Be warned and please take a break because this reader has gone berserk*

*now that the reader has calmed down*
Kuroko sure knows when to be useful :3
Mako is so adorable while apologising. ... so so adorable! Why did ya have to kill Takara. Why Maki, why?

Oh dear! Seki just knows how to ruffle Midorima hence I ship them *thumbs-up* I approve. ... I mean whi didn't crack up at her joke and especially when she added "Well, I thought it was funny joke. I was practically laughing in my head."... mwahahahahahah! !

Oi oi! I only like the friendship part between Seki and Takao and that is it *huffs*
Oh damn! I forgot that Takao actually likes Moto.
Seki was following Moto when she went on a date with Takao and had broken down while talking about Nakano.
Seems that Seki stands strong for everyone but she also needs someone to hold onto while she shatters down...

And Seki has yet to meet Aomine. ... oh gosh! I'm so sorry! I thought they met during the basketball match against team silver. Probably no one had much time to properly talk to each other...

*AHHHH AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHH* I really can't stop laughing. Maki just caused another scene and woth no other than Midorima XDDDDD
And my stomach protested due to excess laughter when I read this: "I think Maki-tan had dis automatic hatred towards Midorima-tan..."
*Ghosh! I can't stop myself from laughing*

Within all the commotion I never realised where Kagami went. Good job Kuroko! !

Seriously Midorima! Who is the kid there? Really Maki and he forgot about himself! : P

A small correction: Everyone were just shocked and were as frozen (as) Midorima ().

Lol LOL XDDDDDDDDD
The last scene. I mean. Seriously. ... Awesome touch.
*Gwaahhaha bwahahahahha*
Oh Maki, Maki! You haven't seen the extend to which Midorima can be a kid!
OMG! Maki has got some spark in her to do that... Especially when Maki said, "Now this is what kids do, four-eyes!"

Thanks a lot, Iv!
Love ya story to the bones!

For some time I was shell shocked about Rinki and it is still rattling my mind! That was the least expected but now I remember Rin being conscious of Rinki... That is kinda scary!

Oma Moto. ... A disheartened but a kind person. He is someone I want to hit yet feel sad fir his loss... How mean of you to be playing with these emotions!
Oma says that Michibe's hair is an 'eye sore' what will he think of Momoi- she is so adorable!

Momoi actually made water and something explode. .. hahahahhaha. . Gosh! If Riko would have been there then it would've been a total disaster!
*gwaahhaha*
I think you wanted to write: Those four were loud themselves since Kise was in the same room as Kuroko, who tried to get(away from) his attention.

Oh nooo! Poor Okamura *pfft* I can also imagine him crying out crocodile tears...
No one invited Akashi :O
*giggling fit * Kagami is so adorable when chased by Taiki *3*

Maki is damn cute! If only she wasn't the one who killed Takara. ... This is no good. This is absolutely treacherous for my heart.

Seriously "Shouichiyo" *ahahhaha gwaahhaha* this is also along the lines of "Kiseki" LOL :DDDDD XDDDD
But no! I want "Takaki" and I don't care if it doesn't make a proper one! *shoos away others*

Why would this happen! Chiyo doesn't know the loneliness Takara felt wwhen she decided to join the Game! What exactly is Maki's background :/

Yayyyyyyyyyy! Takao is coming over while obviously accompanying Shin-chan! I can't wait to see my Takakai :P
Seriously Tomimura! Horrible guess Takao... She wasn't there in the second mixer :D (yessss! I remember :P)
And Tomimura opened the door *pfft* *ahahhaha hahaha gwaahhaha* Takao must be dying to tease Midorima XDDDDD

When Tomimura said that it was bit crazy plus the great Oha-Asa prediction. ... It is certainly going to be hell lotta fun * ahem * I meant trouble ...

Oh my! The fluffy scene... My heart was fluttering all over! But when Seki said "You should see Maki blush then. It's even cuter." I reached fangirling lvl 9000!
It is true! Such a sight to behold ;)
Abd I can see my Takakai. ... I guess you are kinda stuck with my pair :

See ya!

Earlier I never understood Koizumi's anger but now I completely understand her. Poor Kise! Being on the receiving side of hatred... not used to it :P

*a hahahahhaahhah a hahhahahahhaha* Ohhhhhh my! LOLLLLLLL... Man! Alex is going to go on kissing spree! Which reminds me if we get to see Hyuuga and Riko too *giggles* and we have yet to see Kiyoshi if possible. Oh! So many things are still there :) and if I remember Kasamatsu's roommate is Izuki, right?

*laughs and falls off the bed* oh the scene created by them.

That's right, Kise did see Seki killing the other Maki and with the red streak on her hair removed there would be no difference. But what disease Ayane had? She was in the hospital when Chiyo met her...

I was just picturing Maki and Kuroko and then when she threw Kuroko away! *pfft* she is so adorable only if this Game wasn't involved *sighs* This is no good for my heart! She shouldn't bond that much but isn't it so lonesome!

Seki did love Takara... Chiyo lost her sister and Seki lost someone she loved :'( I'm kinda giggling imagining Maki shock and her taking a step back. ... So cute such a Tsundere when she said Takara's name was nice. I ship Takao x Maki! I guess you know thay :P

Oh boy! That one was funny when Imayoshi keeps pulling Sakai's leg...
RINKI! So now I understand. ... Oh boy! I got goosebumps whenever Rinki talks especially when I heard that she became prominent when Nakano 'innocently' gave her a name...

Bright eyes- Rin and Bangs covering her eyes with a twisted smile would be Rinki. Did I ever tell you how much I love the way you have built up Sakai Rin's character.?
Just one thing- was it Rinki who killed those mean fangirls or wss it Rin?
I want to know more *3*
No wonder she could tell the different Akashi. .. hmmmmm...

I didn't like it when she gave a creepy smile to Kasamatsu. ...

I like this part a lot and I kinda laughed at this too along with a small correction: Or getting on people's nerves. Or (worse)!

See ya, Iv!