Aww, that was fabulous! And Killian taking a step back so that Emma wouldn't lose Henry because of him but I am so glad that Emma is taking a leap of faith with her feelings and not letting the man she loves go! And I love that you pointed out how Neal just assumed he could be with Emma after breaking her heart, leaving her in jail, and having a fiance! That was great, thank you for this!

Amazing!

Lovely. You wrote a very true to herself Emma and a very good Killian. I appreciate the brief mention of her parents, who definitely at this point in time would have preferred Neal.

Extremely great story!

Such a lovely story !

I wish you would have made a scene where that tell everyone and Neal tries to take Henry bc of it but I loved this

I liked it, but I wish you'd included the scene where they tell everyone

Gaaaaah! Your CaptainSwan oneshots are always amazing!

Oh this has to be my favorite "first time" cs one shot that I've ever read... EVER! I love, love, love that Killian finally won her heart (not that he didn't already, she just hadn't realized it yet until now) by proving that he was going to do the honorable thing because he knows how much her son means to her. The way you revealed that as well as her reaction to it was perfect. I'm glad that she finally opened up to him about her true feelings and even going as far as to tell him that it wouldn't be the same if he left and that she'd go find him herself. Now that's how you OTP! The "I love you's" and calling him by his first name was so special and I just enjoyed how much emphasis you put into both. The morning cuddles followed by passionate sex was amazing! I bow down to you and your incredible skill for writing smut. This was just so hot and passionate. Excellent work!

Oh my goodness. I loved this! Loved that he was going to leave to keep Emma happy. Though I wish Neal being a total scumbag would have been more thoroughly addressed, perhaps Emma confronting him. I liked how you kept it about them but maybe after they announced their relationship you could have Emma tearing him a new one. He was going to take Henry away from her! Bastard! (I hated Neal so much so love these types of stories.)
Splendid job, cheers

Awwww ... wonderful. I love that she realized that she definitely should not be with Neal. Hook is the only true choice. {winks}

I haven't speak english very well, but I read your story and I loved it. Was really amazing, Emma and Hook are so cute *.*

Ha! That sounds so like Neal, he will make all choices for Emma like she has no mind of her own :)

This was a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing. It made me smile how sweet it was and just do damn perfect :) killian deserves a happy ending.

What a beautiful fanfiction!