You really should change that from Romance/adventure to tragedy/romance. The story was fine up until the last of the next to last chapter. I can’t see that Hermione would come out and say “will you fuck me”. Everything from that area on was just a shame. The story was fine. Yes there were a few holes but I was willing to over look them. When I got to the point that Hermione propositions Merlin I just did a double take, thought I hit a button and entered a different story. It just came out of nowhere! I was like “wait?...what?!”

Ooo so Hermione was shoved out of the broom closet (broom closet is what the pagan community calls keeping your nontradional religion a secret from family/friends).

What! You can't finish it there. It was getting really interesting. Now I want to Cry. Poor Mordred

i really liked your story and mainly the mixing of these two wrolds but i somehow didnt get the ending...what do u mean by everybody lies?

fjwksikhgweakskjl MORDRED! *sobs uncontrollably*

Wait, what? I just... Huh?

What happened to all the build-up and foreshadowing? How... What?

What?

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Love, love LOVE More please *puppy eyes* Thank you for writing this and yay Merlin and Hermione

I'm really liking this story. update again soon please

oh my merlins beard! this is so... uhg! no words can describe it but please continue updating! tears of joys just please continue

I love it ! I read it all in once.
Please update soon I want to read it until the end :)

I hope Mordred doesn't go bad in this fic

Good work. Keep it up

Wow, nice work

Oh boy Mione... You're in the shit now

Oh merlin you twit