I don't know if you still look at your reviews now but i wanted you to know that when i read this i forget that it's a fan fiction it is written in almost the same kind of style is Rick Riordan you have a bright future in writing. I also love how you included the gods' point of view as well.

Thank you so much for adopting the story from singing fire and finishing it. I love how you stayed committed to the story until the end

I think that it should be the reality in the future but please dont let anyone die and also the gods should come flying in on their chariots. to fight Gaea with the demigods

im sorry if im clueless here but what is teh obvious question when jason glanced at percy

l really like this story i was literally crying when Percy's heart stopped beating you basically rewrote the blood of Olympus in your own way. I think you have a powerful talent for storytelling and have a bright future. there are some grammatical errors though so i would recommend having an English teacher or a trusted adult read your chapters before you post them.

I truly truly truly loveee your work even though I may be a little late XD

but...he’s a son of Poseidon. How can he almost die from going in the water? Was it from exhaustion? Nonetheless I still love this story️

aww... I loved this!

there's an Oliver reference in the author's note! my family says this all the time when we want seconds at dinner, lol.

Btw a defibrillator only works if the heart is "fluttering", not if it has completely stopped beating. Cool story tho ;-)

perfect story my man

This is so good!

This is- *sigh* AMAZING!

Ugh. Wow. I can’t believe I’ve already reached the end... what will I do with my life!?ahemm anywayyysssss your writing style is amazing and really unique. It’s really just so gripping and intriguing. The idea behind this story was great, beyond satisfactory . I must say since I read the original HOO series before I read this it did I weird me out a little, especially the ending . But honestly that didn’t matter since the whole Tartarus thing was EXACTLY what I had been starving for. I love everything about this. Wow, yknow i feel like I just want to keep staring at this page for ever. I don’t want to leave! Also, I’m reading this in January 2019, and I’d like to know when you wrote this. If you could get back to me that would be great. But I totally understand if you’re you’ve forgotten about this fanfic or don’t write things on this site anymore . Thanks for taking me on the absolutely wild, heart breaking, heart warming, and terrific , thrilling, perfect, extraordinary ride I’ve been looking and searching for.

Loved this one it’s really great. I’m so grateful for this amazing fanfic