Love this story. Update soon please.

Hmmmm see Edward is such a contradiction. I can't help but think he has greater depth to him and his feelings toward Bella are much deeper...but I think he gets so lost in his shallow fascade,,...ugh I don't know I don't understand him. I feel like your story ends at the beginning. There's clearly so much more to Edward and it would be good to see them learn to become loving equals that respect and lean on one another above all else and all others.

I wish you didn't finish this story when you did. I never really ended up liking this Edward much. if you continued on and we saw his develop into someone devoted to bella above money, his siblings and stuff I'd reconsider. He started showing potential but we never find out how much he takes Bella's words to heart when she tells him of her lonliness, misery and feeling unable to speak to him because of his power and feeling unequal so this story just felt unfinished for me.

Loved it but wish there was more x

This is my second time reading this, and I enjoyed it just as much. Thank you!

Wow, I can’t believe Bella actually thought she was the victim in this mess. She destroyed Jacob with waffling and only stayed with Edward because she didn’t want to live on the run. The entire story, all she cared about was her own self-interests and her libido, no matter whom she was hurting the process. Edward must truly be blinded by her beauty to forgive her so easily. I hope he wakes up soon, before he gives her any more of himself.

I don’t believe you want to know what I truly thought.

Yes, I definitely feel sorry for Edward. I hope he finds out what Bella’s really like and ditches her asap. If Jacob’s stupid enough to take her back, he deserves what he gets.

Yeah, gotta say I’m not really a fan of Bella. After all that Edward’s done for her, she seems to forget about time the second she sees Jacob without a shirt. I feel sorry for Edward and think he deserves better.

Thank goodness she declined his offer!

I liked the story from the beginning to about chapter 50 and then it completely fell apart, left me feeling confused,especially regarding Bella's feelings towards both Edward and Jacob, it was just back and forth and a weird left turn. it's a shame

Wow! What a story! I went through so many ranges of emotions reading this. That's a hard thing for a writer to do well, (Make readers feel the same emotions as the characters are feeling). But you did it and you did it so well. Congratulations, what a great story!

James?

I miss edward

Wish you would write again. Update this story. You have such a talent