Aww I felt so bad for Luke when he thought she didn't love him back. All throughout City of Ashes and City of Glass I wanted to hug him and I wanted them together. The City of Glass ending was beautiful!

LOVED IT SO MUCH! Please write more...!

Please make a xxx scene. I haven't seen one with Jocelyn and Luke bedited, bit I think that they'd be good for this type of thing. Sorry for typist, i'm using my phone

MORE INSTALLMENTS. NOW. I NEED MORE LUCELYN FANFICS TO READ.

It was good! Just one thing. Don't use cliche's. I'm only referring tothe part of "butterflies fluttering in her stomach". I'm no writer (I probably couldn't even write a fanfic), but this is my "review" :P

P.S.: Yes, Sebastian really is my name (it's hated throughout all the fandom :( haha)

Hey I like it! I think you should write a wedding scene and maybe a scene where Jocelyn finds she's pregnant and several more scenes going along maybe midway Isabelle finds out she's pregnant and a week later Clary does and then finish it with Jocelyn giving birth and then (make it a boy cause she has clary and it could finish with her starting over with a son.) Sebastian could walk in and say, Mom please don't freak out... an then see the baby. Also by that point she should be at home on the couch and Luke just went upstairs and Sebastian opens the door and walks in with the intent to get to know his mother and sister better and the baby provides a show and tell of how Sebastian can be kind you should add a scene near the beginning where Jocelyn walks in (Sebastian/Jonathan doesn't notice) and he's busy playing with He baby like saying awwww and just nicely fawning I've the baby in general an then Jocelyn decides to try to connect with him and at some point if your to write this story Jonathan should get angry at someone but calm down saying for (some girls name) and then let him explain to his mom how somehow he fell in love with this girl and he got angry at her and accidentally killed her(when he's talking go to him talking to the girl getting angry accidentally killing her) and how ever since he's just regretted everything an seen how devil Valentine and what Jonathan use to do was. Then name the baby Sebastian and have everyone start calling Jonathan Jonathan again.(Sebastian to show Jonathan that's not his name anymore.

sweet story

I love these two!
PLEASE CONTINUE :D

Really adorable and cute. Jocelyn and Luke are possibly my favourite ever fictional couple, beating Ron/Hermione, Percy/Annabeth and even Four/Tris (Maybe not quite) I've written my own Fanfic along these lines; I encourage you to check it out, writer to writer. I like mine better but that is because I am obviously and umblamedly biased. Plus it includes Jocelyn nearly falling into a canal. Well written with a very good definition of spacial and time awareness.

OMG AHHHH FANGIRLING! I loved this sooo much! your a great writer! Gahhhhh keep writing!

This is actually a good first story of yours :)
Hope it could be a little longer though if you decide to write another one!