There was a LOT of exposition in this chapter. I found your idea of magic/muggle genetics fascinating but I wish you had found a way to insert it into a conversation. That would have been much more fun.

Really love this story. I truly hope you’ll be back to it. And hope that all is ok.
Thx for a lovely read.
Marie.

I do hope that you finish this story. It is different than most and I have really enjoyed reading it.

Nice idea but mostly poor execution
Too much side story too little plot
Though i enjoyed the story i did skip lots and lots of babeling and it became hard to track actually important parts from the babeling and in the end there was barely ANY important parts

Great chapter.

I love all your different plot lines. Good job updating through conversations. More interested in characters you created. This lets me (us) see plots and outcomes.

I hope you finish...it's a good story!

i like that they Are seperate

It might be a bit early for Keith to reveal just how he'd helped Harry to so-many strangers.

Thanks for sharing. What’s fun story and I love Keith. Please write more when you have time.

Concerning the will the Potters undoubtedly had one. In order to legally name someone a godparent you must name them in a will. There is also the fact that their wealth and status as an ancient and nobel house would demand a will as it was tradition and the state of war meant they would constantly be facing death and risk leaving Harry an orphan. I also refuse to belive Lilly and James were just too stupid/cocky to make one like some idiots proclaim. Not to mention they would probably want to have certain letters, momentoes, and gifts given to their friends when they died. I mean, do we really want to belive they wouldn't want to help out Lupin or that they wouldn't want to set up a stipen for Harry's godparents to raise him. To be honest, I've never seen a good argument as for why they wouldn't have a will. Those claiming they didnt have one almost always do so to blindly defend Dumbledore or Rowling's lack of attention to important details.

You missed an important detail. Harry doesn't know his name as he was only ever called freak or boy. It should be another warning sign for Keith of the abuse.

I hope you eventually pick up this story again. It has been extremely entertaining.

You've got a minor plot hole in here. In an earlier chapter, you said that the Brackwoods weren't religious; now you say that Keith was raised in a devout family and still attended church regularly. Like I said, a really minor hole.
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This story's really good. I've read several "intervention" stories over the years, and this one's one of the best.

Great story. Look forward to more when you are ready.

Take care

Are you going to update this story?