this is a amazing

I liked this one shot a lot! Seeing Cardin hurting and Blake standing up for a Faunus is quite satisfying :). And it was nostalgic to go back to season 1 on this manner.

I lookforward to the monochrome story when it's ready :)

Hope you'll have a good New year's Eve!

This chapter was just too much for me to not squeal at this chapter. :)

It was cute and all, but in the end I can't say I liked it I'm afraid. The driving force of this story is Blake thinking A and doing B - repeatedly. It's really inelegant since it doesn't feel like Blake and it's hard to associate to due to it coming across as cartoonish or something thst should be reserved for comedic pieces.

So much fluff. It was much needed after watching Volume 3. I look forward to any future shorts.

Poor Weiss,always the target of her team's pranks~ XD

This is kinda genius! Thanks!

Oh my god this was hilarious. I wasn't sure what Blake was smiling about until the bone part popped up, holy crap was that awesome. And Blake playing it so cool and nonchalant as ever is incredible. I can't remember the last time I laughed this hard over a story, this is definitely one of my favorites.

- Moongarm

Haha I love how you wrote Blake in this chapter! I never really saw her as the kind of person who makes pranks. This is refereshing!

Cute and fun chapter :)

Interesting first chapter, though the execution was a bit rough this time. Some forgotten words and unclear sentences.

You also have parentheses all over the place, essentially adding author's notes in the middle of a paragraph and it breaks the flow of the text hard. If you can't naturally fit it into the text, don't add it.

Don't remember you doing this previously, so I'm left slightly puzzled over where you picked up that habit.

An interesting chapter. Never considered Blake x Pyrrha as a pairing before.

Will be sure to check out your kickstarter page when I get a moment to spare.

This was beautiful, and the way you wrote it carried their emotions through so well. I even cried when I read that they had been found.

Well this chapter was a complete tone shift from the last one - still an enjoyable one to read despite it's mood. Looking forward to the next update. :)

God damn it girl! Every time i read your fic,i cry! You make me so god damn sensitive and emotional and you are also taller that me! (Dramatic music!)
More seriously, i do like this chapter but i have to admit that it still feels a little wierd... I mean, i can't say it was nice because my girls were mourning the lost of their partners, but god damn, it was so sad and held some sort of raw emotion!
Well the thing that mater the most is your ability to make your reader feel those emotion and make them a mess too ( #me) XD
So, like always, keep up with the good work!