very nicely done!

A fascinating story. Thank you so much for this much

This is fun.

I have the beginning of a story where I will be putting references to non-HP shows and things, and am planning to list them on the next chapter (so if chapter 1 references a Monty Python sketch, it will be mentioned in the afterward of chapter 2). You may want to do that, because I know I am missing the references you are putting in this story.

Good luck with it! Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

Oh I want more of this one! Very amusing and like how events are turned on their head due to Harry finding other 'magics'. lol
I am going to follow just in case there is more to come.
One of the few 'incomplete's on my fav list!

You're having loads of fun here and I'm greatly enjoying it.

very good anymore?

I love this so much!

eeeenteresting!

I just happened to stumble across this about 20 minutes ago, and I must admit, it's very much captured my interest. I don't know if you ever plan to continue it, but I would certainly love to read more about this. Or even similar stories. Anyways, great work :)

Please please please update this story! I'm totally curious as to where this is going to go!

That was a good bit of world building and I just love the idea of a "parasolmouth".

It's an interesting premise, what with all the things jam packed in the story. I'm always a fan of world building and it seems you've taken different parts of many different places and smashed them all together for an interesting result. The shopping trip is always a good vehicle for exposing Harry, and thereby the reader, to new elements of the magical world, even if it is now mired in cliche. I certainly enjoy the somewhat droll tone of this story. It keeps what would have been an otherwise boring chapter refreshing. Thanks for writing.

Your summary caught my interest but your story, good author, has caught my attention.

Very good story keep it up I enjoyed it a lot

jejeje great chapter!