Awww, this was sweet, I love the brothers rallying around Jack to make sure that he's okay.

I know it's been years but where's the rest of it?

I love this so much!

c'est tout ? il doit forcément y avoir une suite ! Comment va réagir Evelyn, puis comment sera Jack le lendemain ?

une suite :)

Update soon!

Love love love it! Amazing story and idea. Gotta say I totally didn't picture them as young, but it totally! Thanks; keep updating

OHHHHH C'MON! YOU CAN'T POSSIBLY LEAVE IT THERE! PLEAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEE NEXT CHAPTER!

I really hope there will be more parts to this!

R u even gonna write a chapter two?

love this!

I luv ur writing style and the brother relationship is amazing please write chap 2 soon!

Please please continue soon!

OOOhhh... This is good. Please continue!

OH MY GOSH YOU WROTE ANOTHER ONE TOO!
YESSS! How lucky are we that the best new talent in this fandom is writing two stories? heck yes this is awesome
I love this story. Oh man Bobby and all the brothers protecting him just awesome. It was so cute when he gave him the candy bar. And how Jerry was shoving that guy. I love this story so much you write it perfectly just exactly what I like to read about for this fandom. Thank you please update more! I love it

Great work! :) I love the brothers' protectiveness. And, as odd as this is going to sound, I thought it was sweet that Bobby didn't think twice about pukifying his own glove for Jack's sake. Also liked the detail about Bobby being the only one allowed to mess up his own car, haha. I think you've got a great start here, and I'd love to read more!