This fic is awesome! I can't wait for more.

I really like your story. I still can't wrap my head around males being pregnant, but it's acceptable here. Thank you for updating and have a good day! :)

Great story! Cant wait to read more!

Great story. Please go on writing.

Wow.

I must say, I usually stay as far away as possible from OC fics and kid!fics alike, since I find they're almost never anything I like. However, the summary on this one drew me in, and I'm beyond glad that I gave it a chance.

This is an excellent setup you've got going here. Raziel is a strong, independent female character, but not to the point where she's a Mary-Sue. She's well-rounded, and obviously has flaws that we can see here, such as her impulsiveness. I genuinely enjoy reading her character and I do not find her annoying at all. That is quite an achievement, dear author.

Another thing I am extremely happy about is your spot-on characterization of Crowley. So many people cannot write him, no matter how much they try, but the dialogue you've given him here is so wonderfully iCrowley/i. It makes me warm and fuzzy.

Sam and Dean are deliciously in-character as well.

The one small, minuscule nitpick I have is that, when Dean first meets Raz, he thinks that she "has a conscious." Yes, she's fully awake and aware of her surroundings, as she's conscious. The word I believe you were looking for is "conscience." :)

Other than that, this is a fabulous story, and I am looking forward to reading hopefully a lot more of it in the near future. Keep the excellent work up, dear author!

Aryennae

This is intriguing, more soon please!

This is really interesting so far! Next chapter please :D

love this story! especially the dean raz moments. you've got me on the edge of my seat with all the revealing stuff about the future. can't want for more!

awesome new chapter! can't wait to read more and i love the dean and raz moments! you've got me on the edge of my chair with all of these future reveals! more please :)

Really enjoying the story so far. Can't wait for more. Please update soon!

The Jo/Benny thing was confusing at first - thanks for clearing that up! Can't wait for more!

Looking pretty good so far, can't wait for more!