snort* snicker* the fucking end tho haha

Hilarious and a wonderful read! Great writing and descriptions!

So cute. I think it's actually kinda cool how you showed how someone like Haru could suddenly fear water, and then come to love it again.

Thank you for write this! I really enjoy this sweet story

Not bad for your first time, not bad at all :)

Aww, this is so adorable. Thank you for writing this! I really enjoyed it. :)

aaaaah awesome i loved it! especially the way you portray rin and haru like wowie perfect c:

When Rin was drowning it was making my chest tight. D: You did a great job of transporting me right into the story. Sexy and sweet. Good job.