i loved it... thank you this was very romantic, i wish it'd happen in the show...

I liked this.

You have a very nice... visceral quality to your writing. Really puts one in the scene. Keep at it!

You have a serious habit of keeping things hanging.. A word of advice, if I may. If you don't intend to go for a multi-chapter fic, work on the endings.. make it grow ample enough to halt it just right. Looking forward for your next work..

All in all, the story's well-written. Everything's intact, with some additional fluffs, of course, and lovin' it! Thanks..

You seriously need to write a multi-chapter book..

Very well described...felt like I was actually seeing it. A foolow-up would be welcomed ;)

I really loved this, one of my favs. Well-written and the way you write them is just right. I look forward to reading more from you :).

Just reread this. Very good ... Again :-)

This is great, really! The last line is so perfect.

aww...his "I will always find you, Lizzie" is equal parts sweet Once Upon a Time-ish and creepy stalker Phantom of the Opera-ish.

I do find it interesting that she could sense his very presence and I'm curious about how she can and if he's the only one that she can sense when she isn't directly in danger(you know that hair raising oh crap something's there isn't it? feeling)?

also I have a prompt for you...I've been wondering how Lizzie's adoption plans will fit into Red's plans for her/them...I mean if she's bound and determined to get her child he's probably going to have to accept that because if she finds out that he interfered with her dreams of motherhood she might really kill him/never forgive him/make his life hell...anyway I personally think that any problem he has with her adopting might not be so much about her being a mother but who would be her child's father...but I'd love to see your take on this along those lines. I'm betting it'd probably be in the future after they've had more time and trust developing...and more UST hopefully. I have no clue if Tom would or wouldn't be in the picture at that time...I'm not sure if where she lives if single people can adopt or not...so I was thinking that it'd be more likely that she and Tom are still together while she's working on adopting...plus if Tom was still there Red probably would be jealous/possessive of Liz I bet.

if you don't want to do a long multi-chap story don't. I really like your oneshots...I hope that you do have some of them in the same universe so they're kinda like sequels/followups...plus then they can progress a bit more in their relationship since we know a bit of the buildup already. anyway go with your gut. you have good instincts for these storylines I think.

Haha. She got tricked. And he got the hug he wanted...whole at the same time keeping her safe and confused still.

Good story. As for not having it in you to write a multiple chapter story, tsk-tsk! You need confidence in your ability. You are an excellent writer. All you need now is time and a workable plot. Great work and, as usual, I look forward to reading more works from you.

Oh, this was lovely! Thank you for writing this and please consider adding more one-shots as chapters to this story!

So good. Don't fear the longer fics. My advice is to finish it before you start posting it.

What tumblr are you getting the prompts from?