Brilliant story mate, just a quick brit pick . " 4th grade" doesnt exist in the uk . The closest comparison is "year 5" it's an easy make but it's also one sure way for brits to spot the american xD

Uhh what the hell happened to Hannah Abbot? She was the first in Harry’s year group.

So far I’m enjoying this Fic, hope you plan on continuing it soon.

Pretty sure Remus was bit when he was like 4 or 5. And the Wolfsbane potion wasn't invented until like the mid 1980s.

Oh come on! You haven't updated since Jun 13, 2018 how much longer are we going to have to wait? As good as this story is I might have to unfollow soon from impatiently waiting for updates. I get that life gets in the way but an update after nearly two years of waiting would be nice.

Sorry if I sound rude I just really like this story and would like to see regular updates.

Im already turned off by how powerful harry is I’m not a fan of OP stories so I’m going to have to drop it. I mean I’m alright with OP as long as they’ve truly earned it. Like somehow after only a few months to 1-2 years they can match dumbledore and Voldemort stories suck. I much prefer stories where they go back in time or are older and already graduate to truly have time to pursue higher and more complex levels of magic.

I refuse to believe that HERMIONE of all people did not score at least ONE O.

You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I am enjoying. However, your English skills need some attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are NO apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe (with a few exceptions: his, hers, ours and theirs). You need to revisit the difference between plural and possessive.

Keep writing! You can greatly improve your readability by paying more attention to every word you type.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.

good thing in my story that fat toad and fudge will meet their end before they get jobs at minstry

I worried there that Lilly was being a smart idiot by going into Gringotts with only herself and James to confront the perpetrator ofthe bloody coup. Whew! that they escaped!
I thought there was a phoenix ward in Gringotts - so how did Hedwig flash the Potters out?
Also - I though Ragnoc exchanged the tainted item in the Lastrange vault - so how was the cup still a horcrux?
In the near-after-life, Harry was told what the horcruxes were - but none of them were canon, so how is the cup still viable?

Well then - I LOVE your story. It is well woven and intriguing. Your character development and engaging style is entertaining and truly makes the reader continue on to devour your story. You have an occasional your/you're issue, but this is one of the best I've read in a long time! Keep up the good work and come back when your muse is ready! :)

Really difficult to read...I had hoped that Ragnok. I had hoped he could keep the newly growing alliance. I wish the family had approached Ragnok and he could have stopped the coup. Ah well...Can't have it be like 'Dallas' and have it all be a very bad dream?

I know Dumbles isn't a bad guy in this, but he hasn't shown that his decisions are all that great when they pertain to Harry. And Harry seems to go along with them even though his parents wouldn't agree. I want to tell harry to STOP and think. I'm also sad that other Harry lost his life to give this Harry extra power, and it was in vain.

As a parent - I think, "gee, they all have mirrors to call their parent...WHY DIDN'T THEY USE THEM?" Sigh...preteens...

Does good to a Filipino's souls to see the Philippines mentioned in a book. ️

Good story

just a quick fix for a misspelling...
posse instead of posy-(which is a flower)