LOVE!

i actually really want to see a chapter where Sav takes on Derek, that would be gut wrenching.

wah, Isaac melts my heart every single time he gets kicked out, great chapter, it was very well written.

that sucks Savion feels like she owes her life to Deuc :-\

the opening montage was so sweet with Savion and Derek,you didn't make it too mushy mushy, i hope you bring more focus on this "Darkness" that's within her, sounds really interesting.

i feel like this is going to be a game of tug o war with Savon in the middle

oh snap! this should be terribly awkward lol :]

did she just kill Erica? O_O ohhhhh man that can't be forgivable.

i love Sav's relationship with the twins, it's adorable, and they are so much more likeable in your version...even Aiden. I wasn't expecting the ending at all, i'm really curious to know what it is.

I think this story is great, i read it word for word which i rarely do with most of the stories written on here. Great introduction, i like that you kept it short and sweet. You're a better writer than you give yourself credit for :] please update soon; don't feel discouraged.

Still really AWESOME! I LOVE IT! :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! It rocks. You need to continue!