Mellow-chan! I know that people didn't review your story because it lacking in something that only you can find. Please don't lose hope also never give your dream and be inspired and I'm sure the readers love your story if you update interesting and romance moments between Masumi and Maya. Keep the inspiration in you and I'll wait for chapter 2.
Love, Lu-chan *smiles sweetly*

This is amazing I wonder why no one ever commented and that sucks cause you might have lost the inspiration to keep writing this because there was no support. Anyway this is really good. It would be nice if you continued it in the future.