update?
its been 2 years now since you've last updated almost 3...
this is such a nice concept and plot and i really love your story and the way you portray it.
Here's to hoping that you'll pick this up..
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I need an update. There are so few good plot shikamaru x oc.

she's gonna be princess mononoke no one can convince me otherwise

I love this story! I hope you come back to it one day

Will you be finishing this story because i fell in love with it and i would really love to read more!

Hi! I recently found this story and I just want to say that it's one of my favorite stories so far.

-I really like how you describe the Inuzuka clan, I like how you go deeper into the more feral side of the clan and how you describe how they are different from the other clans.
-I also really like how you portrayed the shinobis. I really liked how you didn't hold back in showing how violent they actually are.
-Lastly, I really loved how you came up with the consept that Shikamaru's brain might hurt him since he has such a high intelligence. Not a lot of people would have went that deep into trying to explain/analyze why he is so "lazy" or "unmotivated".

I look forwards to read more of your stories!
Keep up the great work :)

I never found a story that involves that heavily Shikamaru and how he acts! I love it! Also how you describe the different smelld and how the Inuzuka Clan acts! I hope you will update soon. This is such a good story and I see so much potential!

A good Shikamaru x OC story is so rare and I love it! I can't wait to read about their first kiss! And in regars to Tsunade. While I understand what you mean, I would think that Kakashi should also be an option. He is kinds forgotten while the time skip... I mean, he has also ninken, he is fast, has very much knowledge. She is better then a normal genin and I think when she focuses on some skills she could be great even though she doesn't train with Tsunade. Like a speed demon. And she trains with Kakashi and Gai xD This would be really nice.

Well, I hope to see you soon again! It would be very sad if such a good story would be abondoned.

Love, Jess

I’m so sad this hasn’t been updated in so long. Probably my favorite OC fanfic ever. I’ll be naively hoping for a new update in the future.

I really liked this fic and wish it was longer! First off, great job on delving more into the inuzuka clan. I don’t see a lot of OCs from that family and your take on it was very good! I like the way you realistically started off Nobaru and Shikamaru’s relationship. I wish I could have seen where it led to in cannon Shippuden.

The fight scenes, I have to admit, were not really your strong suit. They’re hard to write so no fault to you there! The rest of the writing was well written and well paced! Good job :)

Amo tu historia

Hope you still plan on finishing is a great story

I hope you continue this.

Are you still continuing the story?

I could just make another oc but as a Sannin that would be more suited to Nobara while having Tsunade teach Sakara

I agree, Nobara and Shikamaru’s relationship is more realistic I also think that there would be talks of marriage and planing but not anything to out there given their age. I think you’re doing a great job with their relationship.