this is the best one ive read do far plz you have to continue plzzzzz

Fucking awesome

oh my gosh this is one of my favorite beyond fiction i have read please make more and continue the story its so good.

RACHEL! YOU'VE RETURNED! REJOICE! Also, yay Jarinne! :D

-JF

Yeah it was great! Please write more!

RSVP! Write more, please! This is basically Brandon Mull worthy! If you're still out there, please continue!

i finished reading the beyonders series about an hour ago, this really warmed me up inside. Also this is one of the most likely things to happen, considering my close finishing of the books you should believe me. But really, this was great.

Nice one-shot. This fandom needs more multi-chaptered stories, though.

I think this is an amazing story, even though it had not taken me long at all. It still had me on the edge of my seat. I finished the books not long last year of 2014. So I'm not up to date on what every one has decided to write or draw on fan fictions.

Very good, but I wish it was longer! but still, I really like your writing style.

Don't touch me I'm experiencing too many emotions right now.

Ahem. What I mean is I like it. I love the idea of this, it makes me so happy to picture Rachel in Lyrian again. And I adore the ending with "I'm Rachel" and "So am I." Thanks for making me smile. :]

I loved it! Pretty please with a cherry on top continue? If you don't, I might just have to mix fandoms here and get Will to shoot you, Horace to stab you, and Eragon to break your arm with magic... please? :D

OH MY GOSH! UPDATE SOON! Seriously this is awesome! Bringing back Rachel. I mean i love Corinne and all but I'd much rather have RachelxJason _

Horrible

Wow! Please update soon! This is amazing!