This was a great conclusion to the story! You kept the twists coming in this one-just when you think they are safe, some other threat appears.

I really liked how Kathryn used the little boy to kill the mage. And I really liked Zevran in this-he's not blase about death, but he's a little matter-of-fact about it, which makes sense considering he's an assassin. He was used really well here.

And very happy to see that Wynne was able to save Alistair. The kiss at the end was a sweet reunion, and Zevran's parting line was gold.

Great story! Hope you keep writing and post another one for us.

This good thanks for inviting me to read I love fanfic. to bad you cannt make this and quest mod :) Well wrote will finish in a moment thought O would say I like how you made the little boy corrupt its so creepy. Nice touch for halloween season :)

Well I love it so far the suspense. Nice not just saying that because we are friends :) you did well with this chapter :)

The mystery deepens and the story continues. Yay! I have to admit, I did not see that twist coming. I wonder what is going on.

I liked the tension you showed between Elissa and Alistair, and how Elissa is still struggling to deal with what happened to her family. Alistair's concern for her is quite touching.

We get another chapter after this? Yay!

The action in this was really fun to read. I like how you highlighted the skills of each party member, and I especially liked the trick with the shock bombs and water. Really well done!

Exciting developments! This is a really fun story. Can't wait to see how it concludes.

Excellent first chapter. I am very intrigued by not just the village mystery but also the group dynamics.

I really enjoyed this! I think you captured the character nicely. And, I like the little CouslandXAlistair fluff with Alistair and Leliana. I'll be awaiting your next update!