Really good story so far and I sure do hope that you will continue with it and soot

Love this story

Wow you won't believe how much I'm enjoying this story! PLEASE finish this 24 hour day its one of the most thrilling fictional 24 seasons I've read in the fanfic world you really have a feel for what the show's like plus very intelligent plotting and characters too. Really want to know what happens next!

Powerful scene with Jack and Chloe in the cafe thinking about how they can never have a happy life like regular people. I'm sure Jack will do things that the governor doesn't approve of!

Loved the action here! Very true to the show and can definitely picture this playing out in real life. Jack and Chloe would definitely be drawn back into the game this way. Most of the show's run I was hoping Jack would just have a happy life but that's not who he is and you portrayed it well how they both realized they couldn't walk away from everything that's happening.

Only one small thing I noticed, in the last chapter you mentioned it was a clear sunny day then here you said the sunshine in Washington DC was a contrast to the overcast skies of Seattle. Maybe you meant how Seattle is USUALLY cloudy? I only noticed this since I read all 3 chapters in one sitting.

Really good so far! I love how you're following the real 24 hour format and the intense plotting like the real show that's what I go for when I write 24 stories. TOugh reading what Chloe went through with her divorce and losing her child because of her supporting Jack in Season 8. Now that LAD came out we do know she did go through a lot for him in the writers minds too.

I hope you do finish this season. Is it going to be a full season or at least cover the full 24 hour day even if its not 24 episodes? Also can't wait to find out more about Greenfire and their motives/ideology since that's been vague so far. Don't know if its on purpose.

Hi! Nice story you've got going here...
I've never been into J/C fics, but this one looks like a great start- I love your 24-hour format- reading it feels like watching the show in time lapse!
Keep it going! :-)