love it

I've been putting off reading this story because even though it sounded interesting- 88 chapters! I'm so glad I did- even though I seem to have lost a day doing it- it's so brilliantly written! Clearly not rushing through events (did I mention 88 chapters... oh and the 14 chapter M fic open in another tab!) yet at the same time it didn't drag- a very difficult balance to maintain. Heartbreak, sweetness, fun and banter- just perfect. I love your original characters as well and the extended ohana as well. Thank you so much for all your time, effort and talent in writing such a fabulous story.

Faith :)

That was great I hope you do plan to continue this story very soon.

100% loving this story and wishing for more

More more more PLEASE

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I love this story! Please update! I want to see what happens with nikkie, grace and there friend. Also would really be interesting to see if mama mcgarrett shows up or not after the interview! I really love your story. Can you at least give us an update if you planning on finishing the story or if you are abandoning it? It has been two years since your last update.

This story is great! You going to be doing any more chapters?

please update soon. i listened to the story as i deliver parts

This story is really good keep up the good work. I hope you plan to continue it soon. So I will say update as soon as you can please.

Ihave read this about 12 times. Love it.

iblove it hope you add more it took me 2 days to read it

Such a great story. I have been hanging out for the next chapters. Ive even downloaded it to my eReader from Ao3. Please come back to this and finish it PLEASE.

I really like this story. I hope one day your able to finish it, but even if you don’t it was an amazing story to read!

I hope you update again because you have not update for a year and half.