As per usual, your writing is great. I like the way this ended (even if this wasn't the intended finish). I quite like the way you can make a story so developed, even with 15000 words.

Please update!

YOU CANT DO ME LIKE THAT!

Really well written, and an excellent oc.

(finishes Chapter 7)
"Is this really the end?"
(looks at the last Updated date)
This really is the end.

I need more of this, a LOT more.

Whhaaaaa. I neeeed mooorrree. What an ending to the chapter! Gah - this story isn't very long so far, but I've already been so drawn into everything! The characters, the plot, the conflict - it's all so amazing and deep! You've done a great job, and I really hope you continue writing this, because honestly, it's a story worth continuing (and I don't usually say that).
Chiharu is a really nice friend - and I actually like her. Most friends are kinda just there, but you've done well with her. And I like how you've developed Ayame's past. And as always, MIDORIMA AND AYAME. Oh my goodness, they're the best, and I really, really, really need them together.

Anyway, awesome, awesome, awesome job on this story!

And this story stuns me into silence once again. Each chapter is getting better and better. Oh my goodness . . .

And some conflict arises . . . wow. I'm really liking this story. It's definitely one of the better fanfictions I've read, and it's clear you've put some work into it. Brilliant job!

Soooo good. Like I've said, their interactions are so good! Spot on. And Midorima is so in-character - I can totally see him saying all these lines. I like Ayame and her vivid personality as well. You're doing a great job with this story!

Haha, I love the interactions between them! Great writing.

Wow. I didn't expect that to happen. But I loved it! Great chapter. Midorima and Ayame are so great together. You've done well developing their personalities in just two chapters, and I look forward to seeing where this story goes. Great job!

Ahhh, no! I NEED MORE OF THIS. THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER!

Hello
I have read several of your knB stories, the 7-10 chapters completed ones. I like them very much! And now, I start the longer and incomplete ones. So now, I have to endure the frustration of not knowing the end of this one. AARRRGH! I hope you will update this one at some point.

More than a review for this story, I am more about to comment globally. I like your writing style, I appreciate your O.C construction as they are not perfect, not too overly imperfect. Just normal girls, with issues any one could have (well, not the abusive mother one _) The thing I would label as "missing" would be a projection of every relation later on time, projected into the future. After all, high school story usually don't last forever, and while manga/anime like to picture the girl marrying her hard won high school crush, I feel always cheated a bit. So while I don't ask for you to write how the various couple live, break up or not, I would just LOVE to see every guy and girl engaging into a more developed relationship, past the point of getting together. How they deal with each other weak points, how they face several obstacles (like argument, jealousy, growing-up, conflict of interest) and such.
... and this is me going on "definition of happiness" !
Thanks for sharing your stories!

Ack! Souh! Happy feelings sent your way!