please update!

Very interesting so far.

Listen to all the smart people, namely Morwen, The Hammer, Christina, and people like them, they know what the heck they're talking about. My man Boromir was not a rapist freak and was highly respected by ALL members of the Fellowship. Everyone in the books after his death were all talking about how wonderful he was and what a brave leader he was. He kept his sexual impulses under control, and while wary of Elves like Elrond, he generally was respectful. Also read Promises by spacellamaprincess for a great Legomance.

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Ta, ta!

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Gwen

What have you done with Boromir? As a self - proclaimed Gondorian character defender, I must tell you stop! Boromir (my favorite man) is not a freaking rapist. He is a noble, kind, loyal, strong, honorable man, and if he had wanted to have relations with a Sue which I highly doubt he would, he would have asked for her consent. He wouldn't have had those kind of impulses, anyway, because it said in the books his interest was mainly in weapons, protecting Gondor, and getting ready to govern Gondor, not in raping a Mary Sue Elrond's second daughter with impossible parentage. (Ever heard of Celebrian?) Anyway, work on your grammar and formatting, please. Maybe if you work on it and listen to good advice you might write a good fic someday.

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Namarie!

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Morwen E.

Who the hell is that person traipsing around in Boromir's place?

Boromir is DAMNED NOBLE. I'm rather affronted that you would rape his character like that.

Please UPATE SOON!

its great! detail, dialouge everything

you need to write more!:D

why did you stop? this is great stuff! Why did you stop? I'm waiting for the next chapter. dont think that i am rushing you did you stop?

interesting!

And? What on earth did you stop for! i'm waiting! keep on writing i hope that isn't the end your writing is brilliant keep it up!

Look, dont listen to what any one says, this story is excellent. You are a very good writer. Your love scene was great. It can be hard to write a really romantic sex scene without being to graphic but you did it so well. Im very much looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

well, kinda fun! i've read the previuos review and hey, girl, no need to bash the writer...

this site is to write anything you want. sure it's great when readers review (or criticize?) the story but judging the way you reviewed the story, it's a bit overboard! you even condsidered the psychology code thing! i honestly think it's a bit rude.

Someone alert the Psychology Police. Code #9: two days after almost being raped, her mental scars have healed enough for her to not only take the initiative to sexual relations, but actually enjoy it? She must be made of steel! Seriously, that kind of thing sickens me. OK, so she did it out of deference to her duties. (Not that you emphasised that side of it. You emphasised the stupid romance.) It still seems highly unrealistic to me. I, for one, would prefer not to have any male touching me for quite some time.

Also the strange plot-induced destabilisation of characters. When the plot so demands, Esilan is a weak victim to be rescued, yet later she's strong enough to knock Boromir over?

I'm not even going to go into what you've done to poor Boromir's character. Why is it that in most all of these stories he is either a rapist, a male chauvinist pig, or just an outright jerk? I pity him.

And this is a Mary Sue. Sorry, but I think it's beyond redemption. Elrond did not have any other children than Elladan, Elrohir and Arwen, and certainly not with a mortal woman. Cut it out.

Great story so far! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!

this is a really awesome story! i really like it and hope u post the next chapter soon!