This was too predictable.
And you just mentioned that Ness hit Sonic with a bat.

Antidote? I don't think that's the proper term. And during all that nobody saw Sonic leave the room to fight Baldy Mcnosehair?

(Laughs nervously) Whoops, I left the quotes incomplete.

Korrina: (In the distance) Let Sonic go! Or you'll be in big trouble, ya understand me?!
Bokkun: (Confused) Who

Again another awesome chapter :) cool

Please update soon! This looks like an awesome SSBB Halloween story! XD

Hello. Icee The Hedgehog here to review another story!

This story caught my interest since includes one of my fave Smashers, Sonic. Your story shows good potential, but the many capitalization and punctuation errors turn people away. Please make sure to put a capital letter at the beginning of EVERY sentence, and period at the end. (or question mark, exclamation point etc.) Also I spotted a lot of awkward, run on sentences.

Aside from those, I like the story and plot. Anxious to see how it goes. I will go ahead and follow to see if it keeps my interest.