you should make more chapters I want see more

you should make more chapters

Ashley: loosing parents...I felt that...but I made a promise to them to not cry so...I never cry...EVER!
Sophia:my dad is always at work and my mom is very busy so I come to Ashley's house and she is like a sister to me!
Nick:i never felt that pain...I mean my mom is very close and my dad works so...
All:nice story 17/10

Leave it to Sunset to be the jerk, anyways you got this Matt you will rock the stadium. I like the ending for the chapter

Me: Wait, more fanfic ideas? lol
Unknown: Franky...RADICAL BEAM!
Me: Sorry, I was watching One Piece.
Unknown: Anyway, I hate Shimmer so much sometimes. Jerks like that I can't stand.
Me: Anyway, Lightning, teach that Sunset Shimmer a lesson for me. 12/10.
Unknown: Good luck.

I may not know how it feels to lose those that are close to you, but I can understand their pain and sorrow. May your father rest in peace Matt, I'm sure he's proud of you.

Me: ...Wow.
Unknown: My story isn't true in real life, obviously. But still, that's pretty bad.
Me: I know she isn't much, but she was family to me. My closest friend until i was 10. Zoey, my dog.
Unknown: She's one of the reasons I don't tear up anymore. May not be a real person, but she was there when I needed someone.
Me: Anyway, *clenches fist* enough talking about the past. I'm guessing that was Lightning, right?
Unknown: How'd she get there? *scratches head* I can't keep track of everyone, I guess.
Me: 12/10. Good luck.

Me: Nice intro. Who was that?
Unknown: I'm so excited about my story I have to tell spoilers! Do you want to know some?
Me: Now, that wasn't Lightning, so who was that?
Unknown: 11.5/10 Good luck man.

Wow, this is amazing