Awesome . And Ellie is amazing

EXCELLENT! Really creepy and fun creature! I LOVE your imagination!

I love your style! You have mastered the delicate balance between hurting and healing. The banter between the boys is so true to character it's like watching an episode. This story is so riveting I read the whole thing in one evening...walking around the house with my nose in my tablet getting dinner and so on...just couldn't tear myself away! Bravo, kudos and chocolate kisses to you!

What a great fanfic!

horror at that THING inside of Sam - UGH! EEK! Hate snakes! Alien baby and all... love how close it was to Sam's life for Dean to carve (he needs those anatomy lessons!)

horrible evil thing to kill - so very glad they were able to first save Matt (what a fighter!) And then Ellie (great girl). Soooo very glad she survived unWinchesters saved her!

ters (dang droid is messing up again!)

glaSam didn't die! Loved the doc!am

Fantastic story, great plot and MOTW and wonderful injured Sam! Well written and entertaining, loved it :)

Loved it! Very original, great writing. The creature was awesome! Nice job.

Hello again! As always, another wonderful story! I never have a problem seeing your stories as if they happened in the show (save the fact that the boys always seem to miraculously recover two minutes later!), and this was no exception. But I do have to say that Ellie and Dr. Simon (oops if that's not his name) were absolutely perfect! I loved them. I'm not usually one for OCs, but these two I actually would love to see more of. I feel that Dr. Simon has the potential to be a great character!
Keep up the marvelous work!

Mirnava

This was a seriously great story. And where in heaven did you get the idea for the monster? I'd never even heard of the things until I read this. I just had to do a Google image search to see for myself, and man, what a fugly piece of work it is. I almost didn't want to see a physical picture after your gruesome (albeit extremely well written, lol) descriptions, but curiosity got the better of me. xD Once again, this was a fantastic read. Kept me on the edge of my seat. Kudos!

Wow, I've read a lot of supernatural fanfics, most o them sucked. This one and ur other one about the creepy surgeon were the best I've ever found. Ur a great writer and I hope you continue to post new stories. I, for one, will read them all. (;

GREAT story - very original - and a fun and light, very satisfying, ending!

This was such a gripping story, with not one but two especially terrifying monsters. (The nuckalavee was so gross it kind of made my stomach flip but the hydrus got to me even more. As the boys noted, shades of "Aliens" - shudder.) Loved the interplay between the boys post-Home, their courage and banter and care for each other.

awww poor baby Moose. glad he'll be OK.
love all the H/C!
Adn enjoyed Ellie. she was fun.

of all the creeptastic things you've written... moving slimy thing in the belly... wins.

I'm very disturbed now. Congratulations. You've done your job LOL
onward I read!

This was seven different shades of creepy! Nothing gives ya chills faster than a mindless, gut chewing creature lurking in the dark. I did like Ellie; she was a tough chick and was a welcome departure from the usual "damsel in distress" of many fics.

Don't know how I missed this when you first posted it. It was a chill ride from the beginning and I really enjoyed it!

You seem to be developing a fetish for having Dean do surgery on Sam. :) Good stuff-nice take on Alien, plus a fitting title. I especially loved the steel cable bit and Dean's insistence he has great lies. And I'm really glad Ellie (and Matt) made it!