Reading this a second time and it is still as brilliant as it was reading it the first time. Love the interactions between lily and James so much. 3

Reading this for a second time and it is still as brilliant. I love the interactions between Lily and James before they get together. 3

Great story

Loved this story and so glad I discovered it all these years later. I loved the dynamic with Sirius and James and Marlene and Lily. Thank you for sharing!

it was great

I loved this!

Holy guacamole! It's so good! I really had a blast reading it. I love the dynamic, both being blinded by their own feelings... Perfect! I thank you very much for a great fic.

That was a fun read! To glad I've discovered this story! Thank you!

AWESOME!

Lord! Generally I dont read such short stories, but wow! Loved it! Amazing writing and just the right mix of everything! You write soo well!

Awesome story. Can't wait to see wht they do next

Don't procrastinate!

Cute, funny, great fanfic!

This was super fun to read! I love this slight AU-ish situation. Great job!

it was really well written i just think the bit with the dark lord should have had more gravity maybe the way seeing him chilled their bones and stuf. it just semd to casual maybe, yeah?

i love the schemistry between them its beautful but most of the tim eit seems like they're jst having hate sex like they're yelling at ech other than doing the do all over the house the next second.

overall epicness though keep it up sweetie