| Reviews for Elite |
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laurajustin chapter 3 . 12/14/2018 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
w0tevr chapter 1 . 2/5/2018 Interesting premise but the constant 'Sabutori sama' s put me off. Might I suggest considering a beta reader? And please do update your stories once certain faults are pointed out to you. Also, if you are not sure about someone's name, especially in the case of Sarutobi( I've seen him referred to as the Third, Sandaime and even Hokage sama) consider using viable alternatives or look up the character on Google. Small flaws such as this totally ruin people's interest in the plot. |
timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 1 . 4/30/2017 I've been waitin for 3 weeks. But got no response from my PM list. Will you send me the chapters or not? If you have drop writing can you please tell me your ending from "Between 2 Worlds"? |
kidloco chapter 3 . 11/8/2015 i love it how is went, please come back and write more, is good stuff and most had went forgoten or some not that good, good things need to back |
paradoxparas chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 This story is so fucking amazing |
alwaysUncertain chapter 3 . 1/1/2015 this is amazing o0o and the implication of what's to come sounds even more amazing! |
redruby8 chapter 3 . 10/15/2014 Very interesting but the only i would love more of is blood, sweat and tears. Thanks for not making sakura annoying. |
Raine chapter 1 . 10/12/2014 OMG! What's with the 'Sabutori' !? The name is SARUTOBI! Get it right please. |
duchessme chapter 3 . 8/11/2014 was that the end? It was interestng always love strong and solid team 7 |
Huggles chapter 3 . 8/4/2014 This story has a very good plot and development but I think you need a beta to proofread your work. Not to be mean, but there were multiple spelling mistakes (thought instead of taught I believe is quite commun). Other than that, I would love to see this fic continued! |
dark-wolf-howl chapter 3 . 5/18/2014 Sounds very promising :) |
usaginekohime chapter 3 . 4/14/2014 This is really good so far and it seems like it will go on to be even better! :) Please continue with this story when you get the chance. |
sparrowhawk13 chapter 3 . 3/7/2014 Still I like this story a lot. |
sparrowhawk13 chapter 2 . 3/7/2014 Like like like! |
sparrowhawk13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2014 Very interesting! |