Nice to see Angel 9 again. I'd forgotten how naïve that incarnation was, seeing her opposite Angel 12 shows us how far she's come. Just out of curiosity, the Moment's interface chose the image of Angel's 7th incarnation, so I'm wandering is that incarnation meant to look like any particular actress?

For all his brilliance, he can be a real idiot sometimes.

hee hee hee hee hee!
Oh boy, they are SO in for it! This was one not one of my favorite episodes, but I did really like how after the paradox was canceled and everything went back to normal, they DID remember a little bit.
The one remembered decency...
I forget what the other two remembered though.

laughed my butt off at the multiple Rivers.
That was FUNNY!
I can just hear that self-satisfied humming that means the TARDIS is smirking.

I would really hate to be an empathic psychic...
As it is, I am slightly psychic. Just enough to occasionally pick up a stray thought here and there and pick up on strong emotions.
Mostly I pick up on my Mom. The inability to sleep when she is having trouble sleeping, the sudden urge to clean the kitchen (I detest doing that), and a few other things.

It seems like people don't realize (or do realize and are just jerks) what plagiarism actually is. Copying whole chapters word for word and then just inserting or changing a couple things to insert your OC is plagiarism... Borrowing the world, or the characters with permission is okay, but copy pasting like that is not okay.
Seriously, what do they teach in schools these days?

Ah, I really empathize with Ayla. I never had a proper pet as a child. Only once I was practically adult did I finally get a dog. Unfortunately, he is "mom's dog".
My name is on the paperwork, but he is attached to her and not me. Figures.
Now that she is on vacation though, he is hanging out with me more, so that is nice.
Ayla really needs to have a proper animal companion I think. And not a goldfish!

Ohhh, this chapter very nearly had me bawling!
Good thing I didn't get any calls!

You sell yourself short. You might not have been feeling well, but this was a fantastic chapter.

That was so adorable!
The faith of a child is powerful, and can restore faith in ourselves.
I think the 90s animated Spider-man series had an episode like that.
Yeah, I checked and it did. And it was a REALLY good episode.
This re-write is one of my favorite so far.

Hee hee hee!
I forgot about talking to the Horse!
And despite you being sick at the time you wrote this, I very much like this chapter. Don't sell yourself short.

How about something like K9?

My god that was brutal to read

YOU ARE THE CRUELEST PERSON ON THIS WEBSITE! I SHALL NOT TAKE THAT BACK BECAUSE EVEN THOUGH I DIDN'T BAWL I GOT REALLY CHOKED UP JUST WONDERING IF THIS CHAPTER HAD SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE VORTEX AND IT WAS RE-WRITING HISTORY AND ANGEL (strawberry blonde) WAS RUNNING FROM IT THROUGH TIME AND IT WAS CATCHING UP WITH "PRESENT" HER.

As for the "running all your life" I think I read somewhere that when the Doctor was a boy - like a teenager - there was a time travel accident that pushed him through time with his family and met his future self (I want to say it was 12, but it could be anyone beyond 12 now) and at didn't like him because he was what every teenager didn't like - the responsible, arrogant, know-it-all type(ish). And then young!doctor hacked into the government's database and found all the things that he would do in the future because it was so much and basically be a hero that he was intimated by it. He then started to run away from it, not actually knowing he was running towards it by doing so. At least that's what I got from it.

hm. i dont get your explanation for the vortex freaking out. or more like, i dont get how neither of the adults had figured that out. i was pretty sure they had already talked about how it flared up only when she was reacting to her fam in danger? but that it was just way too powerful and she wasn't in control or remembering it. leading me to believe that someone was like manipulating angel or something (thought it might be clara when she goes into angel's timeline but it wasn't ._.). i think what threw me off is that you tend to... explain things the same way multiple times. the only real shocker in what rose pointed out to me is when angel admitted she wasn't used to being a mother yet, which should have been common sense if i was thinking about it.