This could be a great story. I would suggest not using Scully and Mulder's names so much through the story as it interrupts the flow of the story. I would suggest using she and her or he and him at points where you don't need to use their names. For example instead of Scully remembered the panic Scully had felt when Scully first learned of what Mulder had done.

You could try instead Scully remembered the panic she felt when she first learned of what Mulder had done.

It flows better. Makes the story easier to get into.

Hope this makes sense.

These two are so cute!

Now I really need to find out what is going on. Please continue

Oh my gosh! I need the next chapter. I absolutely love this Sculder fic.

Oh cripes, I got sucked in! More please!

Pleaseee update!

Very good story! Can't wait for the next chapter - please :)

Are you going to have to wait another month for the next chapter?:) No! PLease, I need chapter 5! As you can see, I love the story:)

I love it! UPdate please!

Where is Mulder? Poor Scully! This is lik le the worst ditch ever!

It was interesting. Just try not to use Scully and Mulder's names repetitively. Replace it with she or he. It makes the story flow better.

I like this story a lot. Cute idea!