Im quite curious as to what you have in store here. Looking forward to updates!

Love what you have written so far, plz update soon, though they do say that great work shouldn't be rushed! : )

Omg this is fucking awesome. Jodie is a little different to what she was but she is older and has learnt a lot grom her past so it makes sense. i love it and cannot wait for more. :-)

Keep going please!

Dangit! this is actually a lot like a story a friend and I are planning on collaborating on, building off the oneshot I already wrote "What's to Come", which also involves Jodie telling her life story to her friends and eventually going on to train Zoe, though none of those things have actually happened yet.

This is a pretty good start.
My only complaint is that the dialogue where Jodie is telling her story sounded really, really wooden to me. It didn't really sound like Jodie talking.
Elsewhere you got her voice fine, it was just that one section.
Hope you dont mind us doing a similar story, it'll probably go in a completely different direfction, but it does involve Zoe...That's about it really.
Good job.