Reviews for New Love
Pokemon emerald chapter 4 . 2/19
0/0 pfthahahAHAHaH!
catspats31 chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
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Catrin chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
Hi, just wanted to say this is one of the BEST Free! Fanfics I’ve ever read! Thank you so much for making this, and I really do hope you make other ones with some of the other characters!
Goldenrose chapter 3 . 9/19/2017
Hands everyone tissue for more bleeds*
The best threesome for the Free! Series.
Goldenrose chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
Awww! The white doves were the sweetest thing ever!
KarahlYaoiChan chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
omigosh it was intensely, significantly and beautifully amazing! Keep writing dem fanfics! Dang, imagining this happening is too much for meh to handle. Nice use of words doe.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2016
Oh my Buddha, that was hot. Did Sumi T review this yet? Write more please.

- mmChipmonkyy
Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2016
Wow that was intense. Where is the ending tho?
Please finish this-
- Sumi T, Fanfic Critic
Seri chapter 3 . 8/15/2016
XDDD I died when he said ''~Water!~'' XD I'm still laughing and my bff on skype was like '' What you laughing at Seri?'' I was like '' Omg you have to read this MakoHaruRin Fanfic!'' And she goes '' :0 You read them WITHOUT MEH?'' XD I laughed and gave her the link ~
Seri chapter 2 . 8/15/2016
Major Nose Bleed! I had to get like a fucking bucket to catch all the blood from my nose! *v*
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Bucket- U
Mouse chapter 3 . 6/9/2016
good lord you're too good at this... just wow
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
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Anonymousdrarrypahn chapter 2 . 1/29/2016
Omfg I love this shiz more more more!
Alexis chapter 3 . 1/23/2016
I got like three nose bleed for each chapter dayam do more please I loved it
Yaoifangirl chapter 3 . 9/23/2015
Water... hahaha...
I originally shipped RinxHaru like hell, but I have to admit, I started shipping MakotoxHaru after a while of hearing my friends fangirl about it.
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