Ok. I know you're going to update, but I'm going to continue commenting with questions. :) What's the thing with Eloa? She's Meg, but the story about Lucifer and then there's Cas...

How does Mary know Sophia again?

Beginning part... Mag kissed Cas? Mag gets stabbed? How does Mag know Sophioa again?

? Couple things need xplaining. What's the story with Gabe and Mary Mag? How does new character know Gabe? What's gonna happen to Gabe!? What was that ending?

Ooookay... One there was no smut in that chapter. Two, whattttt? How will these new characters have anything to do with the story.

Ok wait... She's immortal but almost died... and she can shapeshift?

Oh I've been waiting some time for this baby. I want MOAR! Awesome chapter as always. I really liked the last part with Eleanore and Gabriel, they're so cute I just want to pinch their cheeks. Also, if Dean doesn't stay away from Sophia I might be the one to give him a few bitch slaps before Crowley gets a chance to. * gives author the usual fix of cookies*

Oh my Chuck! This was so good! O_O This chapter gave me the range of feels from "Awww" (the way Crowley acts around and cares for Sophia) to "Oh fuck no, don't do that!" (that Dean/Sophia moment at the ending of the chapter). *gives box full of cookies*

Don't know how I missed some chapters being posted, but I've caught up now and I really like where this is going.
I am surprised by the development between Dean and Lillian/Sophia... I am really excited to see how that will all come out in the end.
Also, Sam seems drawn to Mary in a way that may not be totally appropriate, given his ancestry and everything... But the situation is not all the normal, now is it?
Looking forward to more, thanks for writing.

Great chapter as always, but seeing as you're not going to update in a while I would have loved it if you put a bit of Crowley. I mean a girl has needs and all that... Keep up the good job and good luck with the moving. *gives cookies to the author*

This was a good chapter and I really loved how Mary introduced herself to the brothers... I also liked how they eventually accepted her and brought her to MoL bunker...
Too bad about the trials and how that went down...
Maybe of Sophia had stuck to being herself and left the hell hound duties to other Hell b*tches...

The best Crowley/OC and Gabriel/OC fanfic around here. Finding this made my day. Good job and keep them coming! :D *hands cookies to the author*

I am really enjoying your fic. The concept is cool and I like the story arcs. I was really intrigued by them and wondering about how they were going to intersect and now I'm really excited about the next chapter...

again, liked the smut in this chapter. try to separate lines of dialogue more. it was kind of hard to read.

liked eleanore in this chapter. keep it up.