| Reviews for Return |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 3/3/2019 Please Update Soon! |
| Yea boi chapter 6 . 6/27/2018 I loved the way you accurately portrayed Mal that made him seem actually threatening! It’s really fun to read this story and see where it goes! Please write more, have a nice day! |
| jeff chapter 6 . 11/17/2017 Where's chapter 7? |
| jeff chapter 4 . 11/17/2017 This series has been really good so far! I like how you sent Mal to the Villian's team, and I wish they could have done that in the show. Keep providing this amazing content! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/4/2016 So intrigued. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2016 Awesome! Please continue! Love it |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/4/2015 Make more |
| Raven Infinity chapter 6 . 6/6/2015 Hey there! I'm loving the story and I really hope you update soon. So far I've seen no grammatical errors and spelling is good, just a couple of small errors but they don't ruin the flow of the story. As I said before, I really hope you update shortly and I look forward to seeing what happens next! |
| Marshmellow chapter 6 . 3/13/2015 Please update real soon, and if you keep this up I will have to the hospital, due to mind being blown! |
| tdfan101 chapter 6 . 10/26/2014 awesome story please update soon |
| Misti chapter 2 . 9/4/2014 Awesome! Simply excellent |
| Misti chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 Awesome! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/1/2014 This is great! :D Will it ever be continued? |
 Trafalgar's Pet chapter 6 . 7/16/2014 Please please please pleease update? I'm loving this so. Every time I watch Mal on the show I literally get major goosebumps, feel really hot and grimace away from the screen when he talks about doing something bad... it stresses me out but I love this alter personality! Is it weird or is it not weird? I don't no, God help me?! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/14/2014 U should have done all the way to the very last eoisod otherwise it was great i loved it in the first chapter it was a little violent it was awesome |
