| Reviews for Inside competition |
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Guest chapter 7 . 7/5/2016 You no update? |
Nightlockiss chapter 7 . 1/3/2016 "While my panic was getting increasingly racist", aka quite possibly the best consecutive order of words I have ever read in my entire life. You should have seen my face when I got the email that this had updated. No joke, I let out some kind of undignified sound or other that no guy should ever make. After all this time, Graham x Stuart is still one of my favourite ships. Thanks for the update, it's made the start to my day a fantastic one. |
dustori chapter 5 . 11/4/2014 Please tell me you are going to continue this. It is interestingly good. |
Karla Colt chapter 4 . 7/4/2014 Its good. Hope u continue :-) |
ILikeToSneeze chapter 4 . 6/25/2014 Sweet, you updated haha! A little confused as to what's going on at the moment but it'll probably clear itself up ;) |
ILikeToSneeze chapter 3 . 6/1/2014 This is good, update soon! |
bethspore4 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014 Hello Ark Q, I really enjoyed reading your story so far, and I desperately hope that you continue writing it soon. I like the idea of exploring both Stuart and Graham's characters, and especially making Graham a more multi-dimensional character than the token asshole/bully that he is in the movie. I've noticed that you're pretty much following cannon so far, just with missing scenes and internal dialogue added. If you really want us to begin to care about Graham as a person, and if I think you're taking this story to where you are indeed taking it, you may have to move away from cannon quite a bit, which I think is fine. However, if you were planning on sticking to the original script, I don't mean to discourage you. It is your story after all. But if someone like Graham was forced to interact on a close and personal level with someone like Stuart for the whole movie, I feel like he could not escape being changed by this. Hopefully for the better. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon. |
Nightlockiss chapter 2 . 2/5/2014 BAE! Why are you taking so long ;-; This is to perfect for me to be without for so long! |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/27/2014 Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
sorryimahopelessromantic chapter 3 . 1/27/2014 "and I received a disrespectful - and totally uncalled for- ball to the head when caught up looking at my phone. "- poor graham aww, that kinda shizz can hurt i took a ball to the face one time. it hurts! so i can feel the poor guy. "How ungrateful of my several efforts not to collapse on the grass." - i laughed outloud at this hes just all like well screw you too then guys the silent thought speak thing going on between graham and stuart i really liked " I had started to feel like the unwilling pole of an invisible magnet. Regardless of how little I cared –in fact I didn't, at all - I knew where he was standing, I knew when he was moving..." - i totally didnt squee at this part... i feel as if this is some sort of foreshadow.. i wonder if graham did feel that same pull? wouldnt it be funny if his new roomie was graham? hahahaha..haha ;-; it is isnt it? :D i wont tell u can tell me ;p |
Nightlockiss chapter 3 . 1/27/2014 I love how this is working out! It's not obviously fast, but it's not boringly slow either. This especially applies to that character development I see going on ;) I'm not usually a guy to notice things like that, as I don't 'read between the lines' like some, but I do like where this is going! Keep it up, I love it! |
Sanctum To The Sinner chapter 3 . 1/26/2014 I'm kind of in love with this story already. Seriously just don't stop writing or I might cry. |
Nightlockiss chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 The Internahip doesn't have nearly as much fanfic as I would like, but yours pretty much makes up for it. I like how you've written the characters, and the fact you use proper english(There are too many fanfics out there containing text speak). Ummm, updates would be a warm welcome and... I'm following this story, and it's one of only seven. I like the ship, too. I appear to have a real thing for putting 'good' and 'bad' together... Keep up the brilliant work! Nightlockiss |
sorryimahopelessromantic chapter 2 . 1/5/2014 im so happy to have found this little gem :') i looked almost everywhere for a stuartxgraham fic so finding this made my day . |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/1/2014 I'd love to read more! Please update when you get the chance! :D |