I'm legit crying. This is hilarious. Dan's just so casual about this, just dlfgsnc. Also, is it weird that I clicked for the plot, almost left because smut, but stayed for comedy? Oof.

Hey! This was so cute and one of my fave tropes, but I'm picky as hell so I'm just gonna drop this and run. Grito is cry but like cry out? Like i wouldn't translate it to cry I'd say like scream or yell or something. Or if you were going for cry like crying I'd go w lloro
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Amazing fic. Oh, and bésame actually came up in a recent test... Thanks!

I LOVED IT OMG IT WAS GRE AT 333

I fucking loved this

Actually this is one of the best ones I've read, I'm a native spanish speaker so I can say you had most of it really good, just never trust google translate you know...but still it was pretty good and the plot was awesome, just can say I trully loved this :)

Oh my god I just realized that I never reviewed this it's just so hot and cute and I can totally see Dan doing something like that and just yes.

Quiero leer este cuento todos los dias poque es perfecto!

That was so good! At the moment Dan said: " "—have already left for a party tonight. " from then I just knew Dan had planned it all along. :)
Also, I speak spanish from birth so it was so funny at that "Quiero que me ..." part. I laughed my ass off! This was really great, I also have a friend of mine that love the Phan-pairing, gonna get her to read this somehow... Just have to. :)

Love this. 3

That was so bloody fantastic! Perfect amount of fluff and lemon (in my personal opinion ;) so sweet :D keep up the awesome work, love ya!

Oh my god I just I can't even right now this was like I have no words this was so sweet but hot but cute but I can't i so can't even I have lost all ability to even

My god this was so perfect. I was so excited when I saw a new story with 5 thousand words in it omfg. Then I read it and there was so much smut and it was so good and unf. Dan was just so confident and flirty. I love it when Dan is like that. Then when Phil asked how long he like him and Dan said since he knocked over his sand castle. Nope. I died. This story was so perfect in so many ways. You're freaking awesome and so is your writing. Like seriously, awesome job!