Aww poor Remus!

Wow. The whole thing is amazing and beautifully written. I have read some where the story is okay and the writing is pretty bad, but yours has both an amazing story and amazing writing. I love how canon it is, as the ones that aren't canon drive me crazy. Thank you for writing this!

EPIC story

I always love a good Remus and the boys in school story, and this was definitely a good one. :-) I very much enjoyed this, thanks for writing!

I love love love this story!

Ahh, I love their banter after the match and the way you describe their group dynamic... Nice
You know, I think the Blacks who think they are royality would insist on a private tutor -especially for the heir.
(It would probably explain for example how draco malfoy was able to conjure a snake in second year or how Sirius recognized Snape using curses way above first year level)
And I guess James learned some good duelling moves from his father who was mentioned at pottermore as quite a capable duellist.
Poor James, everytime Lily discovers sth decent about him, he messes up - I am glad that you write him as a normal boy and not a lovesick puppy who ran after her since first year.

Finally the revelation! Accepting Remus like this... It was so sweet.
Poor Remus. Iike how subtle you build Remus self hatred - the changed appearence of him and his parents, the ear incident...
The pranks are quite amusing - I enjoy reading about the mwpp pranking without harming other students.
I love how you explain Alphards relationship to Mrs Black and Sirius - even if I am a little surprised about the mirrors. I asumed, they enchanted them themselves - when Fred and George can create Extendable Ears than James and Sirius can create two way mirrors. Why would wizards use owls and fireplaces if they could simple buy a handy communication divice?

Aww, I love your style and enjoy reading mwpp ff which uses the new information on pottermore. Loved the scenes with Dumbledore, Lily and the Sorting Hat. My only pet peeve are Remus 'powers', we know they aren't canon and I prefer seeing Remus as a werewolf as jkr intended it - as an illness, not as something that boosts his abilities (smell, strenghs).
However any chance that you would write a one shot about Remus getting his wand? I remember Olivander saying in his notes that he always feels honored when he sells a cypress wand :-)
Would love to see their interaction and I think you got Remus characters pretty good.
Great work!

Glad I found a Remus story that has the background provided on Pottermore. Took me a couple of days to finish this and am glad the sequel has already been started. Though you might want to mark this story as complete.

Anyhow, I like how you portrayed the Marauders in first and second year as being friends but still not as close of friends as James and Sirius. I like how Remus's friendly relationship with Lily is complicated by their other male friends. I always thought it was a shame that JKR never said who Lily hung out with at Hogwarts (besides Snape, I mean) or if Neville's parents were in the same year as the Marauders or what.

Great story. I like how it ends with Remus finally accepting who he is :)

Looking good!

Cant wait to see more! This story was brilliant, thank you so much for writing it!

Are you sure you're not jk Rowling because I must say, this fanfiction is the best I've seen next to the books themselves.

Its so interesting to read I love it so much.
Thank you so much for writing this story! It's made my being sick in bed a lot easier.

Great as always

Yay marauders!

This story is so brilliant, I really should be studying but I simply can't stop reading this

I don't know how you did it but I didn't even see that coming...the whole part with Sirius confronting Remus about lying.
I don't know how I missed it but well done! I'm sure it was intentional because as the reader, my heart stopped just as Remus's did ahahaa

I'm really loving the story!