Hmm they did all that in the ark... Did anyone notice XD

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wow...that was SOOOOO DAMN SECY N EROTIC ! i so luv yaoi ~

Awwwwwwwwwww...so sweet /

Love how you described Lavi's thoughts on the past events; where he was trapped in Road's dream and Allen's 'death'. To be honest, the moments shared between Lavi and Allen is more compared to the others. You can feel the bond shared between both teenagers is sincere and couldn't help but to think that there's more than it meets the eye.

I'm really grateful that you wrote this. Beautifully written. Ahahaha..well, I'm a sucker for this kind of genre XDDD

The cover pic is so adorable! 0w0
And, of course, the story itself was wonderfully written!

This was amazing I think you should keep the story going though i loved the way you wrote this and I really want to read more :3

Ahh I loved this so much! So much fluffy goodness! My feelings are in a riot! Keep up the good work :)

Ah! Im rolling in a blanket of fluff and lemoness! It was wonderfully written, fantastic job!

THAT WAS SO FUCKING ADORABLE! XD

I wish you would've put humor like lenalee heard everything since the 14th room does echo around the ark and someone heard them. That would of been hilarious!

Cuuuuuutee!

Aww. So sweet :3 Love this pairing 3

This was cute and beautifully written. I loved it