Ahha.. This was also a good one but how many more months will you take to update this...

Welcome back! Sorry it's taken me a while to catch up on reading, but I'm glad you're not abandoning this project! I've missed angsty Ash, and you write emotions well. Looking forward to seeing where this fic takes us!

This is awesome i really like this!

its a great story so far. keep it up & good luck!

UPDATE! PLEASE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! It's so good.

Hey! Update this! :)

Updateeeee! I need read the next chap!

good start can't wait for more

Oh god, Misty NOOO! I can literally feel Ash's heart breaking :( but great chapter.

Great Chapter,very suspenseful. Definitely, on the edge of my seat just waiting to know what happens next. I like that Ash is mature enough in this fan fiction to understand his feelings. I am really interested in finding out how deep Misty and Ash's connection goes. It reminds me of the stories of people always having that intense feeling when their loved ones are in , I liked Ash's and Brock brotherly interaction. Keep up the great work.

im a senior linebacker and this makes me want to wrestle a bear to get my manhood back.

I didn't full-on bawl or anything like that, but I will admit my heart broke a little to see Ash so devastated. I can only imagine how he'll respond to seeing her in person.

Amazing writing. I really enjoyed it.

Wow, that was excellent.

:) I am looking forward to reading this