Reviews for Leader of the Pack
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
um... i realize that in most of your stories when James bottoms he doesn't get to come? Like... i don't think that's right...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Hawt! You're good at kames and jagan, really :)
Xvn chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
I loved it can you please make more.
lilo chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Why are Logan and James so whiny and why do you keep spelling Kendall wrong? His name is on the character list... No offence meant, but you could have done a much better job. The boys come off as about 13 and I got the feeling you wanted them to be nearly adults in the story. I know what you were going for but i think you need a beta to make this smoother.