Reviews for Leader of the Pack |
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![]() ![]() um... i realize that in most of your stories when James bottoms he doesn't get to come? Like... i don't think that's right... |
![]() ![]() Hawt! You're good at kames and jagan, really :) |
![]() ![]() I loved it can you please make more. |
![]() ![]() Why are Logan and James so whiny and why do you keep spelling Kendall wrong? His name is on the character list... No offence meant, but you could have done a much better job. The boys come off as about 13 and I got the feeling you wanted them to be nearly adults in the story. I know what you were going for but i think you need a beta to make this smoother. |