First I must apologize for not commenting on each chapter I read. I've enjoyed this fan fiction. It was wonderful and you're and excellent writer. If what ever I'm reading gives me a good feeling I think that's all we can ask of a writer and you have fulfilled that for me. Well done Hazel.

Super Nice!

Wow- Really Excellent Writing!

alrIGHT ALRIGHT ALRIGHT I'M NOT CRYING

(yes i am)

This chapter is honestly one of the most beautiful piece of writing I've ever read - if not the best. It makes my heart ach for Deeks, each line is the perfect fit, and the backstory of Deeks buying the engagement ring gets to me every time. It is truly beautiful and heartbreaking, I hope you keep writing because you, my friend, has got talent. You broke my heart in a matter of a few lines.

OMG! That's awesome. Please continue, I can't wait Kensi to see Kensi's reaction about the ring :3

So painful at times yet so beautiful. Well written. Please write more densi

Besides most of this being just a repeat of the episode, it felt somewhat out of character. Deeks losing his patience? Kensi going from zero to 100 in just minutes? Sorry, this didn't ring true for me.

This was supposed to come after 5x3? Kensi got shot? I couldn't follow this at all; it was just too long and drawn out.

It was so good. I am emotionally exhausted, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Please continue writing for Densi. You understand them while adding your own creative spin.

Fun fact: I just saw your FF name. Pure gold. Pure Densi gold.

I didn't even realize I was on the edge of the seat.

I love your writing style. It's like I'm watching the scene play out instead of reading a story. If that makes sense.
She better be okay.

I'm yelling obscenities at my computer. At you, really. The story is amazing. I don't have a single complaint, but that last line...
SPOILER

If she was gone, than so was he.

Don't get me wrong- perfect. So very Deeks-like. But I literally sucked in my breath and couldn't hit the NEXT button. Your story has me by the throat and I'm having trouble breathing.

Best first chapter of possibly any fanfic I've read. I'm hooked.

WOW-Incredible story. So well written. A few tears rolled down my cheeks. Loved it!