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KitKat724 chapter 5 . 11/5/2018 Brief as it was, that was a very well-written fight scen |
Evil Illusions chapter 15 . 5/16/2018 Loved it. Excellent work as always! |
mal chapter 6 . 5/28/2017 I knew I liked Sango! |
iChaos chapter 15 . 3/7/2017 Nice work. I really quite enjoyed reading it, especially the manner in which Inuyasha & Kikyo worked together to defeat the enemy that caused alk their problems while enabling them to move on. |
DogManBeast chapter 15 . 1/27/2016 Hi I don't know if you ever read any of these comment but I thought I'd let you know this is wonderful. Probably my favorite of your stories since it doesn't involve Kagome that much. Have you ever decided to include any of the filler characters in your stories or do you just hate them? The panther demons would be cool to see again in a well written story such as this. Shiori-chan doesn't become all that significant either. What if she decided to stay in Inuyasha's village with her mother? Or Abi-Hime. Like, what would have happened if she had lived? I guess what I'm saying is the characters that didn't get much attention or characterization in the manga should have some time to shine in fanfiction. Rumiko-san isn't that great of a writer so none of the characters are given depth and the world isn't expanded upon. I just think they can do much more than what was shown. |
DaiHanyou chapter 5 . 12/8/2015 I loved the fact that Inuyasha was the one who purified the jewel. I really believe he has latent powers of spiritual energy. Movie 4 explained it perfectly. It makes just makes sense that Hanyous (beings that are human & demon) can use both human and demon abilities. The main difference between yoki and spirit energy I believe is that Yokiburning passion/animal instinct and spiritual energyrighteous conviction/firm belief. Thats why demons seem more savage when overflowing with Yoki and those who use spiritual energy are more religious. The reason Hanyou dont realize they can use both in my opinion is simply due to lack of self-esteem. They live in a world that constantly puts them down and deep inside they all believe they are worthless. Because of their lack of belief in themselves they've never tried to utilize their human half. Or take pride in it and enjoy being who they are. They all essentially go into combat with half of what they can really do which makes them seem weaker than they really are. They only use their yokai half even though they're not really Yokai. They're Hanyou but they don't know how to fight like a Hanyou so due to their own mental states their minds are forever in a box. Closed off to the possibilities of what they can really accomplish and forever unaware of the massive power sleeping within themselves. I think with some encouragement(and realization of his love for Kagome & his friends) Inuyasha could finally be able to truly love himself and awaken a massive reservoir of spirit energy inside himself which would take his strength to the next level and allow him to become the first DaiHanyou with power strength and speed capable of competing with and even besting the strongest Daiyokai even without Tessaiga. I think Inuyasha really deserves more than the series gave him to be honest. I would have loved for kaede on her deathbed to have agreed to name her village after him and make him the village leader and be recognized as the leader/pack Alpha amongst their friends. That way his home could become a refuge for kind yokai and lost hanyou with nowhere to go. THAT would have made for a much netter story than the direction the original manga went in. |
Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 5 . 11/29/2015 Oh poor Sango:( |
Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 4 . 11/29/2015 Oh what a cliffy Inu Yashas going to blow a gasket XD |
Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 3 . 11/29/2015 Another beautiful chapter! |
Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 2 . 11/29/2015 This was a beautiful chapter very well done and I love it! |
Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 1 . 11/29/2015 I love this so far, I like how there is good detail and no ooc great work so far! |
jessi chapter 15 . 8/25/2014 Great story, I really liked it! |
PhasicDreamer chapter 15 . 3/6/2014 Wow... Just wow. No words can describe my reaction or emotions to reading and finishing this story. Happiness? Excitement? Absolute fluffiness? It was just to amazing for words. Not to mention super fucking adorable. You did an amazing job on this spectacular piece of work and what with Inuyasha being my first ever anime I would just like to congratulate you on a job well done. The way you told the story and kept me on the edge of my seat was an amazing accomplishment in itself. So I guess what I'm trying to say is, it was beautiful and you're a beautiful human being for writing such a master piece. |
animebunny14 chapter 15 . 1/9/2014 THE EPICNESS OF THIS STORY CANNOT BE DESCRIBED! I LOVED IT! |
InuyashasGrl26 chapter 15 . 11/28/2013 Such a wonderful story. Great job! |