So I am reading all your NaLu stories and I will review every one. Like I agree it's too short but keep your head in that spot cause your a great author

Awww thats so cute! Even if it's short, I love it :3

Aw, thank you for the dedication, sweetie!
I'm extremely flattered that you hold my work in such high regard. It's an honor to be such an inspiration to you.
Mm, if I could make any suggestions to you, I'd say pace your writing to better develop the story. Add details and imagery to really give the reader a picture of what's happening. Also, the more emotion you weave into the writing, the more the reader will feel what you are trying to convey.
It's okay, though. I wish I could show you what I wrote the first time I joined ffnet back in '07, ugh. Just keep writing; write for yourself more than for others; improvement will come with practice.
Thanks again, darlin'!

I love, love, love that you include Sting in here. I'm just a huge fan of him, so yeah. XD

Otherwise, I'm also a fan of NaLu (because of moonstrut jeez) and I really enjoyed Natsu's objection and the whole fate thing interweaving throughout the fic.

Short or not but it is very good! I love this, huge NaLu fan! This was very interesting!