Very well done

Aw this was wonderful!

Good

The Doctor remembered Rory, why would he forget Rose?

I really enjoyed this. I'm a pretty avid reader on here but I mostly Stick to completed stories so I missed this one. I would have read it ages ago otherwise. If it is truly finished you should mark it complete. Thanks for writing and keep up the great work with any and all your fics.

Despite being a Claraphile, I LOVED this story (Rose Doctor stories are OK for me as long as they occured before Clara's entry) ! In my mind this is one of (if not the) most heart warming - & greatest stories on this website I have read so far :) - oh, & it was a gripping read too ! It is so nice that Rose & The Doctor were reunited - "happily ever after", & I could read this story again, & again ! - Well done !

I hope your planning on wrighting a sequel

Rory and Amy's goodbyes were heartbreaking, that its no wonder Eleven shut himself away from everyone afterward. Now he has Rose with him, and he will never have to worry about being alone ever again. Yay they finally got married. What a fantastic way to end this story.

HEHE I love how 'In The Mood' came on. That is so completely their song. Its good he can dance well to that one, even if he dances like a drunk giraffe the rest of the time. The best surprise for him was that his beloved Rose is a Time Lady, and he doesn't have to worry about losing her. At least not in the way that he used too.

That was an awful thing to do to your readers! My feelings were so all over the place and then you go and do this or maybe it happened in canon. Its horrible, and if I were Rose, I'd slap him too.

The wonderful Bad Wolf has appeared, unfortunately not even she could save the Doctor this time. That goodbye between Rose and Eleven was heartbreaking.

AWe Eleven protecting everyone, but mostly Rose. Its so sweet, but tragic.

hehe Rose not only likes his bowties, but his fezz's too. As if we needed more prove that the Doctor and Rose love each other, no matter his body. I did love that bit with River castising Eleven for leaving Rose behind again and Rose threatening to slap him harder than Jackie ever did.

Not nice Doctor, playing on Rory's love for Amy Pond, but useful I suppose in times of trouble.

Ah, took me a moment to figure out her outfit, but its rather like Bad Wolf's outfit in 'The Day of the Doctor'. Oh Eleven! After all of the reminders, he finally remembers his Rose! Though I do feel bad for Rory, as Amy doesn't remember him yet. I like how during their reunion, that Rory was happy for them. I suppose excited for them to be together again, even if his reunion with Amy won't happen for a while.
Its Madame Koravian and the Silence who are manipulating everything isn't it? Amy's in her clutches by now, and that's how they have her memories. Poor Rory!

Ohhhhhhhh Poor Rose and Eleven being pulled apart again! Seriously they are like the worst pair of star crossed lovers!