Reviews for Toaru Mishou no Kamijou Touma
Guest chapter 2 . 10/18/2016
And yet another uncontinued story...
azix39 chapter 2 . 9/14/2014
YES YES YES
This is great, I can't wait for the next chapter
MELVINDARKWOLF31 chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
esperando siguiente post
Sperance chapter 2 . 11/4/2013
Well, this looks interesting as hell. I am monitoring this SO hard right now
pltrgst chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
will touma be able to to aoe his ability?
like in mx0
Paul chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
Very interesting premise...looking forward to more
Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
Very good star I wonder if can see more MikotoxToumaxMisaki since two of the level 5 competing for the attencion of Touma would be fun
CrossFaded chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
Great to see your update, and thanks for the small advertisement :)
If the Sister's Arc is going to be over in about two to three chapter, I wonder what other interesting things you've planned for this fic.

Also, I can see that you've been influenced quite a bit from the light novels and manga. There are some minor errors as well, but generally I think the narrative is pretty good.

And about his Clone Copy power, I think it kinda works like this. He can copy the Railgun's ability because electricity is there for him to use like ammo. Similar to copying Accelerator's ability, because vectors is there for him to use, so it's possible.

I could be wrong because you mentioned something related to injection, so maybe those scientists download powers inside Touma's brain, so that he can use those powers?
panda-kun77 chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
I was initially disappointed with the first chapter due to the lack of length and scenes, but I did find it interesting XD. Now this chapter did a pretty good job reeling me in. Im always up for a good toaru fic with Misaki and Mikoto involved so I'm expecting lots of things from this fic.

So far the characters are true to form and the childhood friend touch with Misaki was a happy bonus to my amusement-meter. Her inter actions with touma is just as enjoyable, if not outright funny. They've got good chemistry. Adding those secret letters best the end was also a nice twist that put more then a little smile on my face.

Keep it up... I'm getting some good art inspiration xD with ur fairly descriptive writing.
BloodTrinity chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
The time period seems iffy though, unless your trying to somehow make a crossover with Kazuma-sensei's other LN Heavy Object which is set around that time period-ish. Index erse seems to be around 20042013 ignoring the fact that Kazuma-sensei basically prepared for this by saying Academy City is years ahead in the technology field
RandomReview chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
Ugh another Miktoto-centric story so far...I really hope that "Queen" tag isnt't just for show. I know any Misaki story needs a dash of Mikoto due to their proximity, but please make Misakoi the main girl. Make your story unique rather than yet another Mikoto story.
Lazyman12 chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
Good story. As for clone copy; I have theory it can only work if Touma negates the effect and understand how the power works.
drunkenlullabies90 chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
i really hope you give us a flashback of toumas fight with kanazaki that had to have gone way different
Command Prompt chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
Great story, with a good plot and it is overall very well. However there are several inconsistencies with the use of fount styles for thought and speech. However, seeing as you do not have a beta, this is excusable. I'll be watching this fic. :-)
NNeko chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
Like this is fine, I wanted to see soon this chapter.
And I suppose you wanted stars for Misaki speech xD
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