Good story not too over the top nice flow I like Finns confidence but I do like to see some humility from him aswell like with the kiss when marceline said “not bad” am Finn laughed almost like he knew he was good I think that was cool but I feel like it disintegrated fit his character entirely maybe with a “I actually just rolled with what you was doing but Ill take what I can get , now just play it cool Finn all casual like” -Finn laughed “hahaha thank’s marceline” “thank glob I think I pulled it off” again just some constructive criticism I’d love to see more of this tho I don’t know when you last made it but after the show ended I feel we need more stuff like this

That was cute! I liked the shirt Marcy was wearing (totally her style).

I felt real bad for Finn when he was so embarrassed and angry he began crying a bit, since he's sensitive I could see that being his reaction if Marcy took a prank too far in the way she did. Nice he got back at her. This was a sweet story.

Pls make the story I asked for I loved this story. I don't care how long it takes you it just has to be the best pearl and sour cream white diamond secrets and romance and everything. :3 plz bye meow. Steven universe ship name pearl and sour cream: pour cream :3

Plz make the thing I asked for. Pearl's so cute when she blushes

I freaking love this I read it long ago but I never commented it. I luv it so much but I also want to know if finn hides his feelings from jake or something. Also, I want a steven universe thing we're our pearl and sour cream fall in love but pearl hides it from the others because she didn't want Garnet (especially) and the others to judge her. Also along the story I want you to add a few things like along the story pearl fuses with lapis and along the story we also learn about pearl belonging to white diamond. But mostly make the story about Sour cream and pearl in luv. Sorry big fan your a great writer and I want you to write a story like this. Pls call it pearl x sour cream fan fiction... or something like that. I want sour cream to kiss pearl. IT HAS TO BE AT NIGHT. Sorry luv your writing. Thx. :):)/) (:7
:3

So good and amazing I like all the humor and the fact that marceline joked around before she tried anything new with Finn. I give four .

coregents

where are you part 2

this was great

This is one of the better Finnceline fanfics I read, I liked how you were able to keep them both in character while making your own plot great job!

Out of all the fanfics I read. Yours is the best. Good job. It takes a
lot to impress me.

Amazing name, amazing fanfiction. 10-10

I LOOOVVVEEEDDD ITTTT! Best fanfic EVER! Make more or I might just cry and die of sadness PLEAssseee

then he woke up and it was all a dream T-T

i loved this story!

Honestly that was literally the BEST fan fiction i have ever read in my whole entire life.