Great story! Short and sweet, I loved all the brotherly moments. The stuff about the tree and the spirit it absorbed was pretty interesting too. Thanks for writing this!

I like it

For some reason Everytime someone says sorry for something beacause it's late it reminds me of kakashi from naruto

I apluad you this was a great story!

Very nice and very cute. I found the ending perhaps a bit sudden, but everything worked out pretty nicely. It would've been interesting to see a full switch and had grown Ace and Luffy interacting with the bandits. Overall, nicely done and thank you for posting!

This awesome and cute! :D

Thanks for writing it!

I enjoyed this story. It was simple and well written. Good job! :)

-Yvonne

I wish Ace hadn't died - well at least Sabo's still around

Yay look likes somethings going to happen. I'm hoping that marines/ enemies of some kind show up - that'd be interesting.

So far I'm liking it. It's interesting that you've made them a little older - usually this type of fic would have them younger. Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so cute! I was really hoping ace would kiss him on the forehead before he left though lol it would have been so cute for luffy to scream he loves him as he sailed off :3

Awaaaaa so cute end.. i wanted some more ace X lufffu moments... they are just too perfect .. well i think so.. i love ur story and enjoy it.. it was like watching anime thanks

yaaaay! i wish sabo was there to T_T ASL4EVS

A tree with a devil fruit and a spirit trapped inside. Not too crazy.
It was a nice ending, I think, with Ace and the Straw Hats all like "what just happened? actually you know what never mind let's forget this ever happened". hehe.
I loved reading this story so much! It was interesting (especially how Ace and Luffy were not ten and seven respectively- that was a nice change) and touching. Thanks for writing this.

I love this chapter! :D