It was really really great. Easy to read and lovable characters. You did really great! But I would have loved to read the lemons

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i'm sorry i haven't read the story coz I'm in a hurry. You're this beta who keeps appearing on my fav khr fics. Thank u so much for your hardwork. I only just now discovered thay u have fics and I promise to read them later but I just want you to know you are awesome!

Rowdy, drunkard Guardian is so hilarious. Oh god, I could imagine the chaos and I loled so much.
Chrome and Lambo's antic when they're drunk is comical, I never thought Chrome had it in her to be like that. Ryouhei, lying like a rag, oh please, I would have expected him to be screaming EXTREME around the mansion, knocking furnitures, doors, and even walls until he passed out.
Yamamoto and Gokudera's antic of playing catch is ridiculous and they kissed! What a great turn of event, it even enforce the fact that the truth comes out when someone is drunk.
Hibari, spiking Tsuna's drink, obviously he did because he want to beat someone out.
Tsuna and Reborn romantic moment makes me squee, they were so sweet and that nose... eskimo kiss? (I think) but too bad they didnt kiss because the rowdy guardians disrupted them. xDD
Tsuna yelling meanie, jerk Hibari is just made me lol. It was so childish and then Tsuna went to BAMF mode... hahahaha that was so hilarious.
Then of course, slutty Tsuna made his appearance and oh god, Tsuna with tongue out like those eroge vids made me flustered, I could imagine Tsuna when you wrote it like that and oh god, my mind went wild.
This chapter is good! :D
Everyone's shenanigan is awesome and hilarious!
Too bad Mukuro isnt there (or I didnt notice xD)

Yey! Que emoción! Me gusto mucho mucho Lo ame. Y sobre todo, el final me encanto. Iemitsu limpiando XD hahaha y que Nana conociera de la mafia. Y aceptara la relación de Reborn y Tsuna. Amo el R27! De verdad que lo amo espero escribas mas R27 en el futuro. Te sale muy natural. Me gusto ese poquito de 8059, ahora me quede con ganas de leer sobre ellos... Ah~ el romance Gracias por publicar

Please please please PLEASEEEEE UPDATEÈE ;_;

Thank you for writing and sharing another chapter! I love the pairing Reborn/Tsuna and you did a great job at keeping them in character and adding many details and ideas like Tsuna's new box weapon, Gokudera's (tsundere) behaviour or Yamamotos's inability for choosing proper presents or conversation topics. I also loved Nana here. She is very accepting and I liked how you made her guilt trip her husband after finding out his true occupation.
I really really enjoyed your story and I hope you will get more feedback and perhaps more inspiration to write more? Thanks again for sharing.

This..*gasps dramatically* is GREAT! I mean, while it's a rather common plot, you manage to pull it out really well and unique. Please keep on writing!

this is so adorable and sweet and any other 5 letter synonym. I loved it!

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*blushing reallly hard

OMG !
This fanfic is so cute!
I'm a fan of R27 and this fic reallly made my day!
Aw I love the ending so much
Tsuna and Reborn finally together :3

Oh are you gonna continued this story or not? Cause I'm still a little bit curious what will Tsuna do when Reborn get the adult form back /
*More *** scene xD
*lol sorry about my crazy mind

Tsuna inlove with Reborn.. . .
And Verde, why you? Hahaha XD

R27 fan ·

Awesome! Love it so much! thank you )X3 it's romantic!

Ha its cute, but I would believe this is more R27 material than best friends' material, besides Reborn is more like a father-figure to Tsuna. Oh well, its your story so you decide how it goes, also this would be a great idea for a multichapter story. Looking forward to more!

Awww, it's always good when you manage to get a good picture of a story on your head. I was picturing it the whole time :)
Poor Tsuna, I would have killed Whiro myself if I could-
I loved the ending :)

that story was so heart warming _