Come back to this?

It's a real shame this appears to be discontinued. Your writing is frankly exceptional. Just wanted to say that in case you ever come back one day.

Dude this really needs to be updated...

Holy frick
This was great
Even if not finished it's very interesting
Hope someday ya come back and write more
Glad to see such an interesting take

Would absolutely love it if ya continued this

There’s so much explaining. Your writing is pretty good but it’s repetitive as hell to read explanation after explanation of this and that.

Yet another story starting out amazing, only for the 'author' to abandon it like a moron. What a shame. I guess I shouldn't have had my hopes up, since it took you two years to even get this far.

Also, this is just the update.

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I like the part where you were stupid enough to abandon this story on a fucking cliff hanger in a fucking interlude. As much as I liked what little you had here, I hope you never write again. You obviously just don't have it in you to actually finish anything you set your tiny stupid little mind to.

Just reminding you that you're stupid for abandoning this.

Not a smut-fic, only because you were too stupid to actually finish the story.

Beautiful. The wand selection is a great bit of writing, I'll be studying it a bit. The descriptions are simple, but effective, really a good bit of work!

ohh this looks promising

I assume this story is dead which is one of the saddest outcomes I've seen on this site. Truly remarkable work in the first four chapters and it's a crying shame there isn't more. I'd love to read whatever you put out if/when that happens. All the best in your writing!

So far a brilliant story.
I hope you will continue it at some point.

A shame there's no more.